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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job as always!!!! You're coming along with development of both plot and characters. I can't wait to read more.
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job! :-) I can't wait to see what happens next. Way to go Yami!
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chappy! :-) I'm loving this story and your OC is one you love to hate, ya know? Glad I could help you out some and hope I'll be able to do more for you next chapter. Keep on writing!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, I've really enjoyed what I've read so far! It's very entertaining, and very funny, too XD
I like how you depict everyone! You keep them very well in character, actually! Nice work, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Kudos on what you have and cheers for what's to come,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA Yami Kiyo)
I like how you depict everyone! You keep them very well in character, actually! Nice work, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Kudos on what you have and cheers for what's to come,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA Yami Kiyo)
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I told you it was good! Now you just have to get the rest of the chappies out! :-D
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD love it! Jou and Yuugi are exactly in character. I dont think the oc is too cliche but you try not to make his personality too transparent. ;P Upadate please
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