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by Sempurna

schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD Okay, you've just sold me into a new pairing- and if you seriously think you can convince me that was your first lemon I'm going to cry. Mine aren't even half that great and I've been writing for four years now (Yes, my writing skills are severely lacking and don't develop without a lot of effort)
person RayeMoon
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This one was hot. Ooh, SethxSeto! You just don't see that. I love Seto's game. How clever to get Seth to touch him all over while pretending it's just a challenge. And, you're right, he's likely to rebuff affectionate words rather than accept them as the truth he knows they are. And it was semeSeto over ukeSeth. Hot, hot! You write this pairing even better than I do! If you like stoic-shipping, you should read setoaddict's oneshots. (Or my stories, heh.) This was lovely and I look forward to reading it over and over again. And anything else you write. Jaa!
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done!

I'd love to see the expanded story that this scene goes to, if only to hear the explination for their mingling of auras.

And more smut. ^_^

Thanks for sharing!

'Ko