rate_review Reviews

Me likey. Me want more more more.

it was really good. i like what you have so far. but it needs 2 b run through a grammer check. there r some words that rnt used in the right way. like when aqua says this: “He is very cute. I have never seen a person so innocence and pure as him.” it should b "He is very cute. I have never seen a person so innocent and pure as him." and something like this: "Aqua looks up to the night sky while making a thinking face." doesnt sound right. it sounds better if written like this: "Aqua stared up at the night sky looking thoughtfull."

I like it, and I cant wait for more. I always was a fan of Yami and Aqua, and you use them well, like in one of rose mistress storys (what I want to say: You make them stay in caracter)Really good work, it sound interesting!