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July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, it was actually here.
Um... ignore me.
Um... ignore me.
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July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
He could have been an assassin or pole dancer. One or the other, right? That was too funny.
Umm... what else... author notes in the middle of the story are kind off putting, I never say that 'cause I never actually comment on such stories 'cause they're usually too bad to be worth of my time, but yours isn't, it's a nice story, I loved the boys' voices, and their pasts weren't over the top tragic like people usually like to think.
Regarding my previous note, it's because you posted this story some time ago I suppose, and I was browsing the old pages and found it and made a comment on it.
Sorry if I come off as a little pretentious, I'm trying to stop.
Umm... what else... author notes in the middle of the story are kind off putting, I never say that 'cause I never actually comment on such stories 'cause they're usually too bad to be worth of my time, but yours isn't, it's a nice story, I loved the boys' voices, and their pasts weren't over the top tragic like people usually like to think.
Regarding my previous note, it's because you posted this story some time ago I suppose, and I was browsing the old pages and found it and made a comment on it.
Sorry if I come off as a little pretentious, I'm trying to stop.
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
much love ^_^ Fave lines:
“I think we’re falling in love Seto Kaiba.”
“I think we’re landing. We’ve been falling for a while.”
^/////^ that was so sweet.
“I think we’re falling in love Seto Kaiba.”
“I think we’re landing. We’ve been falling for a while.”
^/////^ that was so sweet.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this story! It is refreshingly original in that it doesn't sound like every other fanfiction I read. AND... Its not cliche!!!! I love the broccoli comparisons by the way.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW
One word.
AWESOME!
One word.
AWESOME!
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Just...wow. I really enjoyed that. I haven't read something that good in a loooooong time. I loved your little commentaries too. They brought extra humor and joy to it! One of my favorite lines "He kissed the blonde so deeply that it would make fan fiction authors blush. " Indeed it does. *too lazy to sign in lol* That and the one about Jou and a condom and a banana. <3 If you have more. You should post it. Srslynao. :3
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, that was brilliant! i am so jelious, i wish that i could write something that good ^-^ i love the joey and seto pairing, and you portrayed it amazingly
thankyou for making my day xxx
thankyou for making my day xxx
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it!!!!!!!! It was amazing, really beautiful, it was so perfect, it was so real!!, I love the way is written, love the way you described everything, love the way their relationship started!. You are an excellent writer, love your work and I would love to read more! You have another fan now :)
Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language :P
Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language :P