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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loved it! It was really, touching in an odd way.
I think it touches on things everyone can relate to, about that awkward 'first time'. Not everyone may have expierenced that exact situation, but it's definately familiar territory.
You're a GREAT writer and I hope to see more from you!
KC.
I think it touches on things everyone can relate to, about that awkward 'first time'. Not everyone may have expierenced that exact situation, but it's definately familiar territory.
You're a GREAT writer and I hope to see more from you!
KC.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, and very well written. I like the relationship between them, it's very believable, not to mention hot.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD! This story is absolutely FANTASTIC! WOW! It has been a loooong time since I've read a story this good. VERY well written, incredibly visual and raw and real and Hot. As. HELL! a million out of ten!
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was...amazing. You managed to take a pretty common pairing and give it flair. You're a very talented author. *giggles* I love the interaction between the two.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! Can I kiss your feet??? That was so hot, please tell me this is not going to be just a one shot!!! You are a great writer, please continue this story or write another of this couple because now I am your fan and I need more, please have mercy!!! Write more stories!! *puppy eyes*