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for Tied Together

by Sands4488

schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kyaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Love this chapter, first Seto helping Jou with his homework and then Jou feeding seto!!! That was soooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeet!! Lucky Jou, he is going to sleep very close to the dragon!!! ha ha ha that is going to be a very interesting night because Jou moves a lot while he is sleeping, I remember that during Battle City he slept in the same bed with Honda and he even hit him! ha ha ha I love the way their relationship is progressing, how they are getting used to each other and how they are starting to understand each other little by little, it seems natural, that is one of the facts that I love about this story, everything is natural, nothing seems out of place, love it!!! Sorry mistakes, English is not my native language!
person 10kara10
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i l.o.v.e this story its so good u got their personalities so right. finally a story where kaiba and joey dont like just fall in love with each other after the first chapter. keep writing your newest fan Kara xoxo
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol that to funny! I love how this story is going, and i cant wait to read more. Setos a closest pocky freak! sorry but that makes me happy. Joey is so gonna b a pain to seto now i bet... o the funny pictures i have in my head of that now lol. and not only is he spending the night but hes sharing a bed *insert yaoi thoughts here*....... o yes that makes me happy. Ok im gonna stop now b4 i get to carried away with this :P pretty please update soon!!!!! (i need to c what setos gonna to do joey lol)
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story cracks me up. If i had a teacher like that and I was Kaiba I would sue. But it makes for a great story. Keep up the good work!
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*smacks Kaiba* stupid idiot! if you want free cooperate! it's like a chinese finger trap, pulling makes it tighter, but you push towards each other and voila! you're free. so stop acting like a stuck up jerk and relax! *huff huff huff*

Ok I've vented, all is well again. I ALMOST pity Kaiba, he hates being wrong sooooo much. I look forward to the next. ja! ^_^
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really sound much better, you are strong, you can do it!!!
I loveeeeeeeeeee this chapter, much more than the last one, not because the last one was not good, I loved it, is just that Seto make me laugh so much with his mean attitude!!! The phrases "This wouldn’t be happening if it wasn’t for that damn mutt! “I only have one problem and you’ve chained me to it.” and “Then that’s his fault, he should learn to control his temper” OMG! that was soooo typical from Mister "I'm perfect so you shoud kiss my feet and be thankful you are allow in my presence" ha ha ha that was so Kaiba and I adore Ohana, to silence Seto Kaiba and stayed alive!!! O.O She really has .... you know! :P this is going to be a very looooooooooooooong treatment with a lot of sessions! ha ha ha poor Jou, He is going to "suffer" a lot next to the dragon *sigh* I want a punishment like that!, lucky puppy ha ha ha :P Love this fic, thank you so much for sharing, big bear hug and tons of kisses. Sorry any mistakes hereeeeeee! :P
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope you are better now :)
I love this story!! and I agree with the counselor, it is a great idea the way she want them to try to know more about each other, love all the things she said to Jou, I just hope Seto see her point of view too, because the puppy is going to try but the neko looks more stubborn. Love the way their relationship is going to develop. Great work! Big bear hug and tons of kisses, don't lose your faith in yourself! Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD OMG this is SOOOO funny! awesome! I love it and I pity them at the same time. great story!
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol funny stuff. well so far i can see any real problems. i like hoe seto says that jou makes it PAINFULY clear he doesn't like him. feels like hes hinting at something to me ;) well i hope to see another update soon please!!!!!
person Mazu
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this one plz update soon

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