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for Tied Together

by Sands4488

person margyy
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kaiba! Can't wait till the next update!!
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kaiba you JERK! *Kicks* Bad CEO! Very bad CEO!
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tehe Kaiba is such a softy. Patting Joey on the head just like a puppy. Loved it!
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! ^_^ I didn't have internet for 2 whole weeks! ;__; but now that I got it back I got to read 3 whole chappies! ^_^hooray! I loved them very muchly, and the last paragraph was just toooo cute! more soon please!
person 10kara10
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heh heh heh there finally starting to notice each other and aww how cute joey is missing kaiba =^_^= keep the story going and i love how u have the relationship moving at a sloe pace it makes it all the better when they finally get together
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh this could be dirty....however i don't think it will be to much too quick. But if you wanted to make it it would be kinky and fun. This was honestly what i needed. It was a funny end to a shitty week so thanks you cheered me up.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo!!! You are evil! hahaha you killed me with this chapter!! Do you want to know how much this capter made me feel???
I love how everything is evolving from hate to something else! :) I always thought that maybe if they could be able to see that even when they are opposites they are so similar at the same time, it could be clear that they are perfect for each other.
I don't believe in love at first sight, I think you find attraction or lust at first sight but love is something that grows in your heart little by little, sometimes you not even know when, where, why or how? and suddenly you discover that you are in love! If you are lucky you can feel a deep attraction for somebody and later discover that this person is amazing, that is why some people believe in love at first sight because they were lucky to find someone compatible in every way.
I love stories that show how love is build, little by little, not like a simple attraction, but as a deep emotion, the love that is born from knowledge, a love that grows thanks to all that big and little things that are part of someone's personality, the good and the bad, the ugly and the beautiful, virtues and defects, and even after you are able to see everything you are able to love that person! :)
I think Jou is starting to see that Seto is more than an egotistical bastard and Seto is learning to see that Jou is much more than a stupid mutt! And if they are lucky they will learn to see that in this case, the virtues of the other are enought to try to forget about the defects and that maybe they will find in the other what they have been not only looking for but what they have been needing...
Eeeeeek! long review! @.@ Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language, hope I was able to explain myself! :P Thanks for sharing this story, I love it, big bear hug and tons of kisses.
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe i cant wait for the next morning look forward to the new chapter soon, i am loving this story hehe wonder if mokuba will try anything
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha Yes he was dreaming about Seto :P
Can't wait to read how is going to be the morning after!!! :P Hope Joey let Seto sleep! Hope it was a very cold night and they wake up with very strange pillows! hahaha
Great chapter, so sweet, Seto think Jou is cute >< of course he will never admit that!!!
Thanks for sharing, big bear hugs!
person margyy
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Poor Joey and Kaiba! But them spending the night together is good! Can't wait for the next update!!