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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!!! You are so evil!!! *pout* why did you end the chapter there??? T.T I want to know what it is going to happen next!!! ha ha ha ha Great romantic story, hope Jou get much more than just a kiss :P well at least was a very hot kiss!! *¬*
Don't worry if you usually are not able to update so soon, sometimes is a matter of time, other times is a matter of inspiration, so don't worry about it, just don't forget the story ha ha ha, take care ok, dying to read some more!!!
Don't worry if you usually are not able to update so soon, sometimes is a matter of time, other times is a matter of inspiration, so don't worry about it, just don't forget the story ha ha ha, take care ok, dying to read some more!!!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it please update soon!!!
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first off this is a cute story. Second you really have to stop apologizing. I had a teacher tell me once never apologize for something you write. Every person has their own style, ideas, and issues. I am one of the worst spellers out there and I kind of stopped caring. I will warn people about it but that's it. I really only apologize if a lot of people say something then i feel bad. So Stop apologizing it's not needed. your story is great and if there are some grammar and spelling issues so what you are human we understand and it's not like they stopped the flow of your story because they weren't really noticeable. Any way great story and I can't wait to read more so good luck on writing.
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice, Kaiba in denial is fun but Kaiba about to surrender is even better. They are just too cute together.
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, glad you liked my comments! I love mokie he is so evil """Mokuba laughed at the two, they were just too cute, both acting like idiots"""" I Love It!!! This chapter made me laugh so hard, other part that I love was the t-shirt "You can look but you can't touch" our Ceo is going to have a very "hard" time next to Jou ha ha ha, He is going to need a lot of cold showers, the problem is when he is not able to have a cold shower so if he is not at home maybe he can use some ice or at least a cold drink to turn off the fire ha ha ha poor Seto "ôôthey're turning blueeeeeeeeeeeôô".
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HA! That last scene was gold!
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD poor seto! he's in over his head! and Jou is sooo just asking for it! Love it love it!
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe CUTE ^^
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joey!!! Love the story!!!
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD *dies laughing* Oh that's too good! XD I love it! Hilarious! Well worth the wait!