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schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! D; It's getting so suspenseful! I'm glad Jaden didn't believe them, but 'ho snap, what's gonna happen now?

A wonderful, awesomeful chapter as always. I squeed and was soo happy when I saw you had updated. XD I'm getting nervous just waiting for the next chapter! I hope you continue with this; I love it so much!
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you portray Jaden, and Chazz's thoughts about him are hilirious as well. Keep it up~!
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squee! I love this story so much! Your style is amazing; it flows so well, and Chazz's thoughts are very believable. I'm glad he's not pushing Jaden away anymore! XD I love his whole take on the situation, and this story is so emotional! -almost cried more than once.- This is a beautiful story, and I hope you continue--it's the story that got me hooked onto this fandom, and one of my two favorite stories on the site. ;D
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really want to slap Sartorius and give Chazz a hug.

Nice update, I look forward to the next XD
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd, I love this story so much. It's so pretty and realistic, and it drew me in at the first chapter. I was actually holding my breath on some parts, because I didn't know what was going to happen. And then I was all worried for Chazz after he did that to Jaden and then I was on the edge of my seat at the end. I hope you continue with this story, because it's my favorite on this site so far (no lie!). I frikkin love you for this.
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you can't stop there!! It's getting really good.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just recently got into Yu-Gi-Oh! GX, so I was happy to find this story.

The thing that I'm really enjoying about this, more so than other "poor Chazz" stories that I've come across, is that the situation by itself in this is bad, but Chazz is making life so much more difficult for himself by not seeking outside help. Which I find to be pretty in character. On the other hand, I don't usually picture Jaden as being quite as clueless as he is here, but this take on his character doesn't bother me, either.

I eagerly await the next chapter:)
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have to love Jaden, he's just so clueless sometimes. It's so sweet and I feel really sorry for Chazz and really want to kick the crap out of those lads.
Like the story, look forward to more.