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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this has turned into a orgy fic...not that I really mind. Yugi better wake up and save Atemu's nuts....i think he's the only one who could stop Yami
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Marik, good story, very descriptive
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeezes life out of you* that was LOVELY!!!! Oh I'm going to be smiling for a long while now. XD sorry for taking a century to review. lol. but anyway, damn that lemon was soooooo nice. that was one of the best if not THE best blowjob/rimming i've read. the detail and length of it was so wonderful without being repetitive--i'm totally jealous! lol.
and i think you had some brilliant characterization ideas in here. the phantom touches. oh goodness--that was good. and oh i just wanted to hug and pet marik--he was so sad! now you made me just be like screw seto--go live happily ever after with marik! lol. it reminded me why marik will always be my favorite character (even if i do never write for him lol)
but boy am i looking forward to the thief king--yum! i'm sure he'll be nice and dominating. *daydreams*
anyway, rambling--
great job!! make sure to let me know when you post the next chapter! xxxooo
and i think you had some brilliant characterization ideas in here. the phantom touches. oh goodness--that was good. and oh i just wanted to hug and pet marik--he was so sad! now you made me just be like screw seto--go live happily ever after with marik! lol. it reminded me why marik will always be my favorite character (even if i do never write for him lol)
but boy am i looking forward to the thief king--yum! i'm sure he'll be nice and dominating. *daydreams*
anyway, rambling--
great job!! make sure to let me know when you post the next chapter! xxxooo
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was hot! There was lots of punishment and oh is Malik going to be in for more delicious fun for the next 23 or so hours. HEHEHEHEHH!!!
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Malik, I guess he's going to be lying on his back or on his knees a lot more isn't he.. ha ha...
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! XD Sorry it took me so long to review, I've been moving into a new apartment. This is such a great idea! 23 more hours. yum! the lemon was really hot and you did creative things in it. i always love rimming in stories and the fact that it was punishment. deeeeelicous! i hope you get some people to add onto here. if i have time, i'll try to add one of my own :)
this is a good canon way of putting the pairing together because it is oh-so-delicious and you never see them together so bravo! love it!
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this is a good canon way of putting the pairing together because it is oh-so-delicious and you never see them together so bravo! love it!
xxxoo
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dark..pretty good..but a little dark. Poor Malik. He needs a hug. lol
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was very good! I've only read one other Malik/Seto fic, and it was very much alog the same lines. Seto seeks revenge for Malik using his brother, and rapes him. This one was much better.
I'd love to read the other 23 hours!! Come on, you can do it! The title cold be 23 hours, the sequel to this, various forms of torture infliced on Malik by Seto, but please, don't end it with love.
Hope to read something soon!
I'd love to read the other 23 hours!! Come on, you can do it! The title cold be 23 hours, the sequel to this, various forms of torture infliced on Malik by Seto, but please, don't end it with love.
Hope to read something soon!