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Nice job! Keep up the good work! ^^

Oh, this is really interesting. I think you did a great job on the beginning. You should definitely continue it, I think the plot is great and would make for a really good story. Keep up the work, I can't wait read your next chapter. Update when you can! 8D

Um, because I'm fond of, Marik, and/or, Malik as a pairing, or threesome, with Yugi, I really want to see where your going with this. You've opened with an interesting idea, I truly hope you can carry it through. A small suggestion, if I may? Try not to rush, or hurry, your chapter along. A little more detail here and there, should make your chapter, "fuller", "richer". I don't know if you understand what I'm trying to say. The best(and sometime the worst(only because of my impatiens), example of what I'm trying to say is "esamas"'s work (search author under that name, I haven't figured out how to link yet, also found on ff.net same author name). If you could read any of her "stuff" (oops chapters) you might get what I mean. I really do want to read a "well" written fic. And this one has soooooooo many possiblities. Make your chapters worth waiting for. "Yesterday's Lessons'" has been faithfully updated on Fri/Sat(depending on time zones). And I'm "desperately" looking for fics to read in the meantime. I'm hoping this might be one. Other "authors/writers" to check out for style would be "tavi"(who's on Hiatus,sic), RayMoon,Catti,Klepto, Ocean, and a few others, who write well, in this fandom. Their links can be found in each others reviews. Or, you could ignore all the "above" if you wish. Just continue, I'll most likely check out the next,at least, anyways. C ya and luck to you.