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June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cwl pls continue so is it gonna be marik who finds him ( is it marik ot malik thats the light i forgot
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March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow! i love this! you must update it!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Please continue soon!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You gotta keep writing. You just gotta! This story is well written, with a good plot, and CrossShipping! Everything a Yaoi fangirl could want! So pretty please, with lemons on top, keep writing? I love this story. Just. Love. It.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH! I LIKE THIS! I like the twist that maybe Yugi could come to love Marik....maybe he could go dark? And help rule with Marik?
And i think you should put MPReg! i would loooove that!
And would you email me when you update? I want to make sure i get to read this story!
the_vampire_lestat_sno@yahoo.com
And i think you should put MPReg! i would loooove that!
And would you email me when you update? I want to make sure i get to read this story!
the_vampire_lestat_sno@yahoo.com
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MAN, this story is so totally AWESOME... PLEASE update soon, ne...!!! ^_^
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
alright a malik/yugi fic!
there was an AU of this pairing years ago but I forgot the title name; it was really good and lemonly! *sobs*
anyway as long as malik/yugi is a pairing (even with three some! *mmmms at the thought*) I'll continue to read it! It's a new interesting twist to all the bakura/everyone yugi/yami and seto/yami fics...>_>;
keep up the good work
there was an AU of this pairing years ago but I forgot the title name; it was really good and lemonly! *sobs*
anyway as long as malik/yugi is a pairing (even with three some! *mmmms at the thought*) I'll continue to read it! It's a new interesting twist to all the bakura/everyone yugi/yami and seto/yami fics...>_>;
keep up the good work
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww..lol..he's beginning to like Malik, how cute. Thanks for updating, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I hope you continue writing, the beginning is gret so far, and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. 8D
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gonk* ....*drools* I demand more~~~~....smutt perhaps in the next chapter? *evil laugh* You know you want to~! Nice job and you so should so go for a threesome. That'd just be hot.^^
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Quick update. Better, on the paying a little more attention to detail "thing". You know what I've noticed? Your chapter starts of really well, but by the time you try to finish/end it, is where you become sketchy/rushed. The first half of your second chapter is a great ending for your first chapter. Right up to the part Yugi is taken away on the dragon with his friends in tow vowing to rescue him. Your Second part of the could be the beginning of chapters 5,6,or even 7th, especially if you wish to include a mpreg. There is no way that Marik wouldn't "take"(um fuck/screw,take your pick) Yugi the moment that dragon's feet hits the ground, willing or unwilling, that's just nature(human or otherwise)bodies, instincts, will dictate that. That could be where chapter 2 begins. So there, you're trapped into a lemon, quite possibly rape weather you like or not. Foreplay is for the willing,striptease(lime suff)and such could be done in due time. Set your, "five years later", scene to "one" or "two" years later. That's where Yugi should be able to,or not,return Marik's "affections". Throw Yami in the mixture and play who's the daddy or he can have one from each(twins?). Though before that, there are those pesky chapter in between before things become"honky,dory". It's your story. Just mind the time line.