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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The haven't loved me for a long time line just hit me like a bag of bricks. Ouchie, what a terrible thing to say... But they must both hurt so much. Even 'Kura with all his stupid stubborn hardheadedness.
Seto's having such a hard time! Usually I'm on Bakura's side even if everything is his fault, but... can't seem to bring myself to his side with Seto being all emotional. Yup.
A chapter tomorrow and Thursday? SCORE. >;D Can't wait.
Seto's having such a hard time! Usually I'm on Bakura's side even if everything is his fault, but... can't seem to bring myself to his side with Seto being all emotional. Yup.
A chapter tomorrow and Thursday? SCORE. >;D Can't wait.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The memory Arc is the second chapter to It was Over.. http://ygo.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600101352&chapter=2
On my site her or ff. net .. yes, that was ballsy.. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4491619/2/It_Was_Over_Part_1 under Mystralwind , 2nd chapter to it was over..
Oh wow, this was a short chapter. You are not kidding.. I guess classes have ambushed you. I'm so sorry. I should be studying more as well. Poor Seto. He was falling fro Atem and then he gets burned. What happens with he and Baku now?
On my site her or ff. net .. yes, that was ballsy.. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4491619/2/It_Was_Over_Part_1 under Mystralwind , 2nd chapter to it was over..
Oh wow, this was a short chapter. You are not kidding.. I guess classes have ambushed you. I'm so sorry. I should be studying more as well. Poor Seto. He was falling fro Atem and then he gets burned. What happens with he and Baku now?
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD............I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED it I just loved it. Thank you very much for making atem reject that stupid ungrateful brat. Oh I hope you make him get down on his knees and beg to get back to Bakura's arms.
Thanks for replying. Most people don't even bother. If you don't have enough reason to feel good about yourself let me just give you one more. YOU ARE amazing. Your stories make me jump up and down on my chair or simply dance around the room. You should feel good about yourself since you are one of the few who ever gave me good moments of daydreaming and that my friend rarely happens in my crazy and busy life.
Thanks for replying. Most people don't even bother. If you don't have enough reason to feel good about yourself let me just give you one more. YOU ARE amazing. Your stories make me jump up and down on my chair or simply dance around the room. You should feel good about yourself since you are one of the few who ever gave me good moments of daydreaming and that my friend rarely happens in my crazy and busy life.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Poor Seto! He must be losing it with all this trouble... I wonder how he's going to be able to handle memory-less Atem, especially since Yami has told him to back off 'cause he's with someone. Ouch much?
It's gonna drive Seto up the wall trying to figure out how Bakura knew.
But hey, now he has to go ask! :D Bwaha!
It's gonna drive Seto up the wall trying to figure out how Bakura knew.
But hey, now he has to go ask! :D Bwaha!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, this chapter was just so good I had to review it twice.
You know, I don't think I've ever read a story where they include Yami traveling back to Ancient Egypt from the Ancient Egyptians' point of view. And I have a feeling if I did find one, it wouldn't be nearly as good as this one. This story has really made me appreciate plot in fanfiction. There is so little of it, and even when there is outside plot that I enjoy, it usually isn't very solid. Yours isn't only solid, but creative and clever. I find myself so involved in the plot that I don't even notice if there hasn't been a lemon for a chapter or two.
This is easily one of my favorite stories, and I can't wait to read the rest!
You know, I don't think I've ever read a story where they include Yami traveling back to Ancient Egypt from the Ancient Egyptians' point of view. And I have a feeling if I did find one, it wouldn't be nearly as good as this one. This story has really made me appreciate plot in fanfiction. There is so little of it, and even when there is outside plot that I enjoy, it usually isn't very solid. Yours isn't only solid, but creative and clever. I find myself so involved in the plot that I don't even notice if there hasn't been a lemon for a chapter or two.
This is easily one of my favorite stories, and I can't wait to read the rest!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I feel like i keep missing an update on this every now and again. I always feel so lost. LOL
Poor emo.. lol NAWT!
Classes are a bitch this semester. I hope you are surviving.
Poor emo.. lol NAWT!
Classes are a bitch this semester. I hope you are surviving.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That stupid good for nothing. Does he even have a brain that shit head? congratulations!!! you made me hate seto...ME!!!!. Oh. You did it... I was an eternal fan of high and mighty seto Kaiba!!! and now I think he is no better than a frog.... no! a lobster.. that stupid good for nothi.... OH I already said that.
Poor Bakura. oh that seto... that good for noth... oops! I'll stop I promise!
and by the way, don't worry about replying just keep writing.That's more than enough to know you won't leave us hanging. You don't know how it hurts when they never finish a good story.
Poor Bakura. oh that seto... that good for noth... oops! I'll stop I promise!
and by the way, don't worry about replying just keep writing.That's more than enough to know you won't leave us hanging. You don't know how it hurts when they never finish a good story.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. +_+ You're tying in the Yami's forgetting-his-past-and-being-sent-back thing! So awesome~ Poor Seto, though, Atem's forgetfulness is gonna confuse the hell out of him and Bakura's just going to have a nice laugh over it.
Gah... Seto shouldn't have broken up with Bakura. But oh well, that's how things have to play out...
Gah... Seto shouldn't have broken up with Bakura. But oh well, that's how things have to play out...
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. For shame, Seto, for shame! The Pharaoh keeled over so you make out with his son when you already have a boyfriend? Shaaaame...
That aside, I'm glad to see more and more of the plot. With each new chapter I get excited for the next one!
That aside, I'm glad to see more and more of the plot. With each new chapter I get excited for the next one!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh my god!!!!! Seto is so in trouble and why do I smell blood from here....Bakura would probably slice Atem in pieces or maybe just burn him alive or something!!!!!! I mean what the hell is Seto thinking. ?// Can't he keep it in his pants or what?...There is no point comparing Bakura to Atem. I understand all about that tiny moment and seto trying to help and all but hello?......He is not helping..........
Just one more question left to ask?...........Are you ever going to disappoint me cause seriously, your just getting better and better in this.........
Just one more question left to ask?...........Are you ever going to disappoint me cause seriously, your just getting better and better in this.........