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for When the Sun Goes Down

by EmeraldRains

person Wildcard
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I'm skimming pretty much everything except the Otogi-Seto-Mokuba scenes. Those are fantastic. I love reading about the two CEOs 'friendship' and Mokuba crushing on Otogi. It makes sense, Otogi's ridiculously attractive and he and Mokuba even have the same sort of skin/hair! And face, even. XD Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everyone has problems =O! But I can't stop reading! and now I just HAVE to know what happens next! Please continue!! I don't particularly like angst fics, but yours are damn good ^^
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I have to admit, I'm only actually reading the parts of the story that have to do with Mokuba, Seto and Ryuuji, but those parts are AWESOME. I love Ryuuji's snark about "I'd love to have Seto here too but one step at a time" because it's so totally him, and Seto coming in at the end, or possibly watching, was perfect! Can't wait to see what happens next! Great job on the characterization, you're spot on.
person violeteyes
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is really good! I love that you have a steady and consistent plot that allows for lots of great characterization without getting too confusing or going off on any tangents. You're very talented, I hope you keep posting!
person Kyuubi-chan
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I'm dying to know what happened to jou and what kaiba is going to do to otogi! Tis bookmarked and hope to read more.
person dragonlady222
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Jou. I hope they can free him from his enthrallment. I feel bad for Mokuba, he is the innocent in this. I wonder what Seto is going to do to Otogi.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so addicting. I just love your writing style. I am dying to find out what happens next.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
@.@ wow, **intranced**
J-chan
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I'm kind of skimming all the parts except the Seto-Mokuba-Otogi parts. If this ends up with Seto/Otogi, I will SCREAM with joy. Seto/Otogi/Mokuba might just earn you my firstborn children. XD
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Sorry for the3 late review. I kind of lost aff.net for a while. A threesome with Yami, Yugi and Jou sounds good. Mokuba is thining the wrong brother.