rate_review Reviews

I love this story! Please keep writing it!

This is a WONDERFUL story!! I love the look into another culture. I like how you use characters we're used to, to teach us about a slightly hidden part of Japanese culture. I also like how you take the time to explain terms and people (a Maiko vs a Geisha) before you use them in a story; it helps it flow. GOOD JOB!

Great chapter, but now that Season One is finished, I get the feeling that the heightened romancic feel is finished and the plot will pick up pace.

So I'm probably totally off base but. . .

I can't help but notice 'the little things' and Yugi cuddling the apple plushie, given to him by Otogi is not a good sign. He might 'love' Seto but Otogi knows him and even though he has no romantic feelings toward him, I think Otogi would know what buttons to push to make it appear that he does in Seto's eyes. Friendship vrs Love. How manipulative can Otogi be? And how perceptive is Seto Kaiba? Is he able to see past his emotions when it comes to Yugi and be just as conniving as Otogi?

Looking forward to see what happens next.

First "readable" chapter in four days on this site! Congrats.

Oh, darn..now that ending's left me wondering what's gonn ahappne next! I really hope nothing bad happens to them, I really hate sad stories. But it doesn't matter, as long as the story has a happy ending...I hope yours does. Whatever you decide, I'm sure I'll love it. Thanks for the chapter, it was very enjoyable to read. I'm looking forward to your next update. Take care. 8D

::squels:: I have to say that this is one of the most original stories I have read in a long time. Not just in the Yu-Gi-Oh section but anywhere in fanfiction. Plus it is Seto and Yugi?! I have died and gone to that big fanfiction archive in the sky. You have nothing but potential!

Oh wow another great chapter. Seems lately I can't get enough of this pairing. And you always make them a pleasure to read. Thanks for writing.

Still finding this a lovely piece. But now that the gang know that Yugi is 'dating' Seto, I expect, things won't remain as smooth for them

Anticipating major disaster in the future..

Looking forward to the next update.

Oh thia was so lovely and sweet! I absolutely loved it! Thanks so much for updating, I really enjoed reading this chapter..though I'm still curious to what Seto's father is planning... Anyways, the story is really interesting and i hope you'll continue writing. You're doing a great job. 8D

That was so sweet! I really enjoyed reading this chapter, thanks for updating. I wonder what Kaiba meant when he said his stepfather was using him? Anyways, I can't wait to find out, so keep up the good work. You're doing very good so far, update when you can! 8D