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Yes, I figured that the two of them would end up together since you're the one writing this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and, perhaps seeing some sparks fly!

~Blue September~

Sorry for the earlier lack of interest in this story. Time and frustrations (hopefully temporary) had me skim and dismiss this chapter. Only your authors note at the top of next chapter reminded of that edge you gave Yugi and eventually Atemu in "Carry On" where redemption, was done slowly but surely. Which is thing I like best about your writing. Should of known better. Annoyance at the amount of time,I don't have, that skimming for something to read takes lately, has nearly missed this. Now I'll be looking forward to each and every update. So hurry up with that chapter 3.

Honestly Aff. should really should have a better alert system. Love this fic.

well thats one way to get a leech off.

Look forward to more. ^_^

... Dang. And this is why ya shouldn't play: 'cause you'll get caught, and somebody's gonna get hurt.

I love the way you've captured their emotions.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

Poor Atemu. That must have been a blow. I hope it helps their relationship.

I feel bad for them. Adding a little excitement may have been a good idea but ot this way. I hope they can talk this out and settle things.

Oh...that was pretty bad..I loved that you wrote in both of their perspective view..it makes the story reall interesting that way! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update when you can, you're doing a wonderful job so far! 8D

Wow... I honestly can't tell how this is going to turn out. The suspense is incredible. On the one hand they have both obviously been very bored with each other for years. But on the other, the whole discovery of the affair has brought out deeply buried emotions. They are sitting on a fence... and could tilt either way at any moment. I can't wait to see what you do next. Well done, and I look forward to the conclusion. I'll keep my fingers crossed it turns out well.

Nice!