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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I.
Love.
Your.
Story!
It is so well written and you can tell,
much research has gone into it.
I'll be anticipating the next chapter.
=D
Love.
Your.
Story!
It is so well written and you can tell,
much research has gone into it.
I'll be anticipating the next chapter.
=D
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, Thank you so much for your nice words. I haven't expected that. That was so nice from you. And haha yes the nickname has been spelled correctly. Don't worry about that ^^
Anyway
Hehe I can't believe that Jou has been stuck for hours in the cleaner's storage cupboard XD I have really though from your last cliffie that he was in some kind of danger XD but well that's good that Kaiba came to "save" him by himself ^^
And hey I am happy that Kaiba has begun to open up a little to Jou. He told him about the current problems that are happening with his company. That isn't much but coming from Kaiba that's really something ^^
Oh I can't believe what Yugi did for Ryou. So he maybe does like Ryou or it was maybe only an act of friendship? I can't really guess right now. But I have really high doubts that Yugi might be Ryou's secret admirer ^^ (I mean there are not much options by the way XD). And Malik seems to have registers some points also by comforting Ryou and that gave him some advantages.
But Yami and Bakura should have been punished for breaking the urn. Silly stupid spirits XD but they are lucky that they are only spirits XD otherwise...
By the way, I am so impressed about your knowledge of Hong Kong's style of life! You probably have been there, didn't you? no way you can have all these information by internet only, unless you have asked someone who has been there.
Ok then can't wait for the next chapter! And I hope that the relation between Seto and Jou will improve! But I like the speed it is taking. It is slow but good. Very realistic.
Anyway
Hehe I can't believe that Jou has been stuck for hours in the cleaner's storage cupboard XD I have really though from your last cliffie that he was in some kind of danger XD but well that's good that Kaiba came to "save" him by himself ^^
And hey I am happy that Kaiba has begun to open up a little to Jou. He told him about the current problems that are happening with his company. That isn't much but coming from Kaiba that's really something ^^
Oh I can't believe what Yugi did for Ryou. So he maybe does like Ryou or it was maybe only an act of friendship? I can't really guess right now. But I have really high doubts that Yugi might be Ryou's secret admirer ^^ (I mean there are not much options by the way XD). And Malik seems to have registers some points also by comforting Ryou and that gave him some advantages.
But Yami and Bakura should have been punished for breaking the urn. Silly stupid spirits XD but they are lucky that they are only spirits XD otherwise...
By the way, I am so impressed about your knowledge of Hong Kong's style of life! You probably have been there, didn't you? no way you can have all these information by internet only, unless you have asked someone who has been there.
Ok then can't wait for the next chapter! And I hope that the relation between Seto and Jou will improve! But I like the speed it is taking. It is slow but good. Very realistic.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a GREAT chapter!
The scene between Jou and Seto was so cute. I loved reading it ^^ (anyway I love all the scenes involving Seto and Jou ^^). It was very funny and the interaction between Jou and Seto was great. They are so in character ^^. Besides, I am really impressed by all the researches that you did about the Chinese culture. Good job!
You even have made a nickname for Seto in Japanese "Aisu Koshaku". Very nice one by the way ^^
The rest of the chapter was really funny. Usually I mainly focus on the Seto/Joey moments but the entire chapter was so funny to read.
I loved the discussion between Anzu and Honda when this latter was talking about wanting to become famous and have many fangirls XD That was so funny to read. Honda seems so childish and cute.
The fight between Yami and Bakura was hilarious also. Man I laughed so much on this part.
And Malik has a crush on Ryou? I wonder who are the other people who want Ryou. Maybe Bakura...but personally I don't think so since he is a spirit, I wonder how he is gonna manage to seduce Ryou without a body. But maybe it is Yugi? well maybe...
Anyway, can't wait to see what is gonna happen next.
And by the way, I love the fact that you are using the Japanese names of the characters as well as their Japanese background. I don't mind the American names but since ygo is originally a Japanese show, I prefer much more when the Japanese names are used.
The scene between Jou and Seto was so cute. I loved reading it ^^ (anyway I love all the scenes involving Seto and Jou ^^). It was very funny and the interaction between Jou and Seto was great. They are so in character ^^. Besides, I am really impressed by all the researches that you did about the Chinese culture. Good job!
You even have made a nickname for Seto in Japanese "Aisu Koshaku". Very nice one by the way ^^
The rest of the chapter was really funny. Usually I mainly focus on the Seto/Joey moments but the entire chapter was so funny to read.
I loved the discussion between Anzu and Honda when this latter was talking about wanting to become famous and have many fangirls XD That was so funny to read. Honda seems so childish and cute.
The fight between Yami and Bakura was hilarious also. Man I laughed so much on this part.
And Malik has a crush on Ryou? I wonder who are the other people who want Ryou. Maybe Bakura...but personally I don't think so since he is a spirit, I wonder how he is gonna manage to seduce Ryou without a body. But maybe it is Yugi? well maybe...
Anyway, can't wait to see what is gonna happen next.
And by the way, I love the fact that you are using the Japanese names of the characters as well as their Japanese background. I don't mind the American names but since ygo is originally a Japanese show, I prefer much more when the Japanese names are used.
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Jou is going to Korea?! The end of this chapter, so funny.
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!
I loved the interaction between Jou and Seto.
I am very excited to see what is gonna happen next.
Please update!
I loved the interaction between Jou and Seto.
I am very excited to see what is gonna happen next.
Please update!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loving the story hope to see an update soon
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was too short...but it was good. I'm glad Jou didn't snap at Kaiba's remarks. Good job and update sooner!
I totally love this story! :)
I totally love this story! :)
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay some more interaction between Jou and Seto!!!!!!!!!!! This trip in China will be so interesting ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter when Seto and Jou will get their own room.
Update please!
Can't wait for the next chapter when Seto and Jou will get their own room.
Update please!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very intresting. But, I would like a question answered please. You mentioned Atemu and Bakura as spirits and being in the items still. How can people see spirits? Spirits have no bodies so only those who can see them should see them. So, do theyhave bodies of their own or do they still use Ryou and Yugi? I would apreciate an answer to these questions if you wouldn't mind.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yup, they're finally there! I just can't wait to see what things are gonna happen now when they finally arrived!
Good job! I believe that good twists and turns are in the sight! :)
Good job! I believe that good twists and turns are in the sight! :)