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for Altered Lives

by Jadelioness

schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Out of all your fics, I love this one the most. It had so many great elements to it. You got sexy men, realistic dialgoue, adorable exhange between Yami and Bakura. I'm glad you don't protray Bakura as a abusive lover like so many other fics. Honestly, I can't stand it but I'm getting off topic, you did a amazing job with this one.
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story. update soon.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha ha!
I loooooooove
your Bakura/Yami love.
Playful and sexy.
Mm mm delicious.
=D
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. It's so cute to see a flustered and embarrassed Yami.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, Oh my gosh, this chapter was too sexy, and funny too! I think this is one of my favorite chapters out of this whoel story! Please write more, I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work! 8D
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last bit was SO SWEET. I can't believe what a good boyfriend Bakura can be when he puts his mind to it! Teasing, sure, but good...
I was giggling at the part with the teacher. I plan to be a teacher someday and all I can say is... I hope that happens to me! No, wait... I meant to say I wouldn't know what to do if that happened except stare. But yes, my fingers typed what they wanted to.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bakura is certainly a devoted boyfriend and a horny one. At least, they are happy together.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so hot! lol..I enjoyed it veyr much, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work~ 8D
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, hooooooooot!
My jaw literally dropped,
from Bakura's display,
for the teacher.
But the bathroom bang,
taaaaaaaasty!
=D
person YamiKuro
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWW! I loved it! It's so cute!

I love darkshipping! MORE PLEASE!

Kuro