rate_review Reviews

That was some hawt fluff! I adore this sequel!

That reviewer is wrong - Katsuya is NOT a Japanese last name! They call him 'Jou' because people call themselves by their last names in Japan, like, a LOT. I hope you write more on AFF!

Constructive criticism: The iie's made me cringe! It's way too formal, and nobody hardly ever says 'no' straightforwardly in Japan, they find ways to get around it.

for the most part this was highly enjoyable. One thing annoyed me though: "Jounouchi Katsuya and Kaiba Seto" You have one of the names backwards. If you meant to have the Japanese order of names then it would be Katsuya Jounouchi and Kaiba Seto. Given that you kept refering to Jounouchi as Katsuya, I'm going to assume that is the name you mixed up. A good way to remember Jounouchi's name is to think of his american Dub name, Joey Wheeler. See, Jou, Joey, get it? Other then that, this was a wonderfully erotic story. GOOD JOB!

Well, you already know what I think about this, but it won't kill me to say it again: masterpiece. I've always admired the simplicity of description, especially when you can describe so deep and into detalis with just one word. Masterpiece-that it is,the description for your fic. I just love it so fuckin' much! The queen of lemon...that's who you are(you know me too well to know I mean it for real, don't you?)
I thought you said you won't publish on this site, but I'm pleasantly surprised you did. Just keep on the good work. :)