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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Poor Moswen. He found out what he did before he died.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally different feel to this as compared to the story that made it to print first time. This Moswen is almost hysterical in nature as he describes the situation as he sees it. Whereas the first Moswen is almost accepting of what is happening and more possessive/clinging to Atemu.
And once again comes the question of who has claimed who and what does this mean in the 'future'?
Can't quite understand the 'golden collar' of the god's reference. Unless this brings back the fact that Atemu could only belong to himself and the gods in the end. Still think Moswen took the easy way out.
If this had been the original ending, I would have been happy, but so much happier that you decided to continue on with the story as it now stands.
bahen.
And once again comes the question of who has claimed who and what does this mean in the 'future'?
Can't quite understand the 'golden collar' of the god's reference. Unless this brings back the fact that Atemu could only belong to himself and the gods in the end. Still think Moswen took the easy way out.
If this had been the original ending, I would have been happy, but so much happier that you decided to continue on with the story as it now stands.
bahen.