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for Rulers and Rogues

by Khat

person lovelock8
schedule August 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
*runs around screaming* Yes!! An update. I was starting to get a little worried. While I always love Yami and Yugi, Jou and Kaiba are really growing on me. Their interactions are so entertaining!
person Ivoryose
schedule August 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have such a soft spot for Ryou. I'm glad he is back with Bakura. Even though he can be harsh he definitely cares about Ryou's safety. I wonder if he will confront Annalee? Or if Bakura has already taken care of that problem
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you can update soon. I hope everything is okay.
person Venetia
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know you weren't really late on the update but I am late on the review. What an interesting reason for Malik's...aggression? I guess is the correct term. It still astounds me that you don't necessarily plan the characters actions to indicate certain things. Like I've said before, it's probably the reason they come off so natural. It kills me that Bakura is being so harsh with Ryou especially since he knows Annalee (who is in the dungeons, thank god) was to blame. But then again, I get the feeling Bakura is not so great with emotions, and he was so probably angry/worried/relieved/terrified over Ryou being gone that when he found him he just reacted....strongly. I hope he doesn't do anything too drastic...I really don't know what he'll do since you always manage to surprise me. I also found it adorable that Yugi's instinctive reaction is to threaten people with Yami...I cannot wait until they are reunited. Something tells me that while Yugi will be relieved and happy it won't be the end of their relationship/power struggles.
person KMichelle
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Ryou! I so expected Bakura to be so much more cuddly upon their reunion - which I suppose does not sound very Bakura-esque. I hope he is not punished too harshly. He's been through a lot lately.
person IvoryRose
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well Ryou's time with the rebellion was sure short lived. It's so cute when he gets jealous :)
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh Malik...still being pretty aggressive toward Yugi. I can't wait for Yami to come back...and that there are no bumps in that road at least
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. You are amazing. The characters are so true to form and yet so unique. I am so excited for the next chapter. Hopefully we are getting close to the return of Yami...? I didn't realize how much I loved him until he was gone (kinda like Yugi tehe)
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You are seriously eeevil to Ryou...that's partly why I love your writing so much. Thanks for an enormously fun read.
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Ryou. After everything he was put through he is going to be punished?!

I cannot wait for Yami's return *grin*