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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am interested in the premise of the story, and I think your descriptive passages are really good. The only thing I would say is that, although the 'hikaris' are all rebel fighters, they come off weak. The yamis are completely untouched, and it would be nice to see more equal relationships. I admit that this is my taste, and subjective!
lasae
lasae
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg! youre back! i found your story sometime after you stopped writing, and i was so disappointed when i thought you wouldnt update anymore. please update soon!
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love doesn't bind.........I like most bondage and all but I feel the spirits and Seto are going about it wrong there aiming for forced love...with it seems the exception of Bakura surprisingly enough in my opinion. I mean he's an ass and all but for the most part he seems to be genuinely caring for his light even if he beats him.....Atemu and Seto are just is forcing it and trying to break their souls, and it seems Marik accomplished that goal....I guess if they want puppets that's fine then.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad the Ryou lost the edge he had when he was out on his own. I was hoping that he would shove his independence and newly found strength in Bakura's face. I avidly await your next update :)
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty interesting...I actually like the struggle that Yugi's going through, I wonder how much longer it'll be before Yami actually breaks Yugi down...he seems pretty close to having accomplishd just that. (Is it sad that I actually want him to win.) Update soon
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it ;)
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. At least, he didn't hurt Fox too much. I hope they can turn things around.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh thanks for answering my q
poor Honda isn't good enough for the story
Well anyways new chapter was wonderful cant wait for more
poor Honda isn't good enough for the story
Well anyways new chapter was wonderful cant wait for more
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn i was hoping for some sex in this chapter :(
Oh well still awsome
Oh well still awsome
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I lyke di$ s+oRy