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wow this fic is...weird. but it a GOOD way though! I like how this is portrayed lol, keep up the great work and I shall sit here and wait for the next chapter!

Mindlink-time!! :D. Ah, poor Jou, to have his mind read and not be able to read Seto's back.. Even though I'm a huge fan of the pairing, I've always played with the thought of whether or not it was love, or simply Kaiba's ego's need to dominate anything that stand against him and wont bow down. And Jou fits that bill perfectly.. And he's pretty :P. But even though Kaiba obviously is an asshole, I still hate Atem the most.. Can't help it, he has always, no matte in what fanfiction, rubbed me the wrong way.. But what did you mean when you wrote that he 'found' Seto? uuhh, evil evil..
Thaank you for a chapter that focuses so much on my obsession :D.

*squeals* I'm sooo glad you've updated! I was afraid you had abandoned

I've been waiting and waiting for two whole years for this to come back! Please don't leave again! Ever since you left, I keep thinking of my own twists for this piece. I need this story! Please I want more!

At first I was really excited about this because I love seeing the hikari's and Jou put up a fight, and not always be smacked right back down, but now those bastards totally have the upper hand.. I hope you turn the tide soon and somehow have the yami's realize what they have lost, ESPECIALLY ATEM!!, and have hikari kick their ass and NOT forgive! (okay, there might have gone a bit too much vengence into that, but it seems like their screwed them over good in the past, they should get punished.. not in the way the yami's do it, but something more humane, yet far eviller and sneaky!!)
As usual I'm mostly paying attention when Jou and Kaiba are the focus, but I think you've done really good with the others as well, and I LOVED Fox, and Fox should beat the crap out of Bakura, just saying.. Yami/Atem.. uuhhhh, I wanna smack him up so bad. At least Marik is a psycho and Seto has been fucked over in his head by his stepfather since he was a kid, and Bakura is just Bakura (but slightly softer????), but Yami.. he is just plain self-centered and.. uhh!!! Yeah, I'm that frustrated..
I'm wishing for more of Kaiba & Jou because obviously, they are awesome, but please get Kaiba to remove the dog-leash-thingy soon, I'm sad at the thought of my Jou tied up like that :(.

Well written with only a few mistakes and I'm looking forward to the progression of the plot!

Good chapter. I guess I lost this story for a while. I'm glad I found it again. I hope it is someone who will help them, but probably Yami is the one who fund them.

Good chapter. I'm not sure exactly where I missed so if I review twice for a chater that's why. I really like the story. I hope that Yugi can make Yami see that what he is doing is wrong.

Good chapter. I wonder what Bakura will do now that he caught him. I hope he is nicer than he was before.

Good chapter. I'm glad Bakura realises he's made mistakes and almost regrets the beating he gave Ryou. I hope they get to see each other.

Good chapter. I hope Yami wakes up soon. They are just making the hikaris miserable. Malik has a purpose. He is trying very hard to keep Marik in check. He is so much more sadistic and cruel than the others.