rate_review Reviews

Wow, I just found your story and its fantastic! I'm not good at detailed critiques, but I can comment of the things that I enjoy. Foremost I am impressed with how you've utilized canon YuGiOh while almost completely making the characters and settings your own. Its great fun to read and try to place together. As for the plot of your story, it seems like its slow with coming together but I like that you've got a lot of little, complex pieces and I look forward to seeing how they fall together.

Another superbly written chapter. i'm interested in where you will take it next.

Congratulations on the opening of the crafting store! I wish you the best of luck. I'm so glad/thankful you found the time to update.

Aw I loved seeing Set. Very well done chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when things get moving!!

Miss you this past week. Glad everything is going well for you.

Hey...

Well I planned to leave a comment - and I thought I already did. But that is not the case: so here we are.

I love this story! How is it possible that I did not came across it earlier? O.o

I like the idea and I have to congratulate you! Your style is wonderful. I really like it.
And Yugi is stubborn... but as much is Yami. So they fit ;)
I like the plot and not a singel chapter was boring! *-*
Yugi's reactions made me smile. He is so... childish in some ways.

And Jou is just... Jou. Really well done! :)

About Yami... I love him! Really! Just perfect. Keep going.

I enjoy reading; so I am waiting for the new chapter. :)

Sincerely,
Nirehtyls-S

Just read this story in one sitting. I can't believe how good it is. Hope you can update again soon.

Just found this story and I think it's awesome. Conspiracies and mysteries and finally intriguing plot line and engaging characters - all of that well garnished and superbly served! I' d love to know what happens next
Thanx

Hmmm...interesting. Can't wait to find out what happens in Egypt.

Egypt?! Haha I did not see that one coming. Thanks for the update!! It always makes me jump a little when I see you've updated :D