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WHAT?!? Haha totally not what I was expecting. You always manage to surprise me. Those poor Hikari! :p Great chapter, keep it up!

*sighs in relief* yes! an update. so they are finally in Egypt.....though not. as usual it leaves me wanting more. i hope you can update again quickly. cannot wait to know what happens next

Glad that Yugi's sight has come back! Poor Yugi, I can't imagine him liking to be taken in front of everyone so callously. And Jou! Seto is very harsh with him...I am betting there will be some repercussions...hopefully he won't be pushed to have another heartbreaking break down. I am looking forward to reading an actual lemon between Yugi and Yami.

I just got back from a family filled crazy day and am so excited you updated! :D What a wonderful chapter. I wonder what is going to happen now that they had to make a crash landing. I am still so interested to see where you will take it next

I find Yam's and Hikari's relationships very fascinating. It's like...it pushes the boundaries of what love is. Like they'd do anything for each other, they care for each other as all hell but won't admit it and they have weird as heck ways to express them. Mostly involving lashing out. Usually when you think of love, you think of two people, extremely dedicated and gentle with each other, willing to spend time with each other, forgive each other's mistakes, and accept the other's darkest parts. While there is some gentleness from Yami he doesn't seem too concerned with Yugi's boundaries/comfort. And there's no forgiveness on Yugi's end. And while there is some acceptance from Yami - right now it sounds like Yami's more about changing Yugi which I can see will cause a lot of major conflict in the future.

But this kinda relationship fits them. Really. Because, I mean, it's Yugi's darker half And you can't take over the world and lead a bunch of psychos and survive in this kinda world unless there's something twisted about you. And what I love about your story is that the characters feel real. Yami's manipulative, yes, but he still cares. Yugi's naive, yes, but he's still stubborn. And possibly the sanest one here. (Also, how do you stuff these characters into this new world and new dynamics while keeping them so in-character?!) While Ryou seems decently content in his position, Jou is still fighting like hell and probably has the hardest counterpart in Seto. The dynamic between those two is ridiculously well written. Jou is irrational at best and Seto is so cold. But there is obviously a love/obsession on both ends. I cannot imagine Jou taking the constant humiliation so well.

So, thanks for your awesome writing! :) And don't let us reviewers force you into anything; this is your story, and you should be the one to decide how it evolves. I, for one, know I'll love it no matter what.

Your story is absolutely bloody marvellous! I so love the way all the characters interract, it's so entertaining and thrilling because I can never guess what especially Jou will say and what will be the outcome. You have an amazing imagination to put together such complicated plot together and that your characters are autentic and have little quirks which add to their depth. I love your ideas and I am happy it's such a long story because I can loose myself in it for longer. So I wish you have a hyperactiv Muse to help you write lots and lots and your university is not too demanding :-) thank you that you created this beautiful story.

I love how controlling the Yamis are and how powerless the hikaris are. it makes me want to go off in a corner and giggle madly. I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in the past chapters, but omg can you blame me? I couldn't stop tearing my eyes off! It's exactly what I'm looking for, I've read a looooot of fanfictions but I usually just read through them if I don't like it, skip over stuff because I can't bring myself to immerse into them, it's been a long time since I've read like this. Addicting! I love your story, there's a few story whose title I won't ever forget and this is one of them.

Ahh! Please don't skip another week?! *begs*

I know you're busy but please update soon :D

Wow. I am always so happy to see that you've updated. I reccommend this story to everyone, and it seriously makes my day so much better. I realize the relationship between Yami and Yugi is unhealthy, but you explore it so well - I love it. Eagerly awaiting your next update [: