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Aw poor Ryou, I'm looking forward to how he deals with Annalee. Finally an opponent he can fight against XD

What an interesting shift to Malik and Ryou....I can't really say that Malik is my favorite but I do have a soft spot for Ryou. Not a huge fan of Annalee but like you said I don't think I'm supposed to be. How cruel of Bakura to do that to Ryou!! Of all the hikaris Ryou is the sweetet and most malleable...I hope Bakura doesn't neglect him for too long. Thank you for the update...I'm sorry to hear your boss is not too nice. But we really appreciate your steady updates! There are so few authors that commit to stories like this. You can really see the dedication you have to writing throughout your story...it is really quality work! Thanks again!

I am glad to hear that Jou won't be down for too long. He's such a fighter. It was interesting to get some insight into Malik and Marik's relationship. And Ryou is at such a power disadvantage with Bakura. But I hope he gets Annalee...I have a feeling he can be quite cunning when the situation calls for it. Thank you for the update. Hope everything is going well for you. Don't let your boss get you down.

Not my favorite chapter simply because Ryou and Malik are not my favorite hikaris. But Ryou might get more interesting now that Annalee has been introduced...

So I'm reading this at work which is highly inappropriate *giggles madly* I loved the twist in the story with Ryou. Time for him to display a little fire. Your writing style is just lovely. You feed us enough tidbits to satisfy me and yet I am always eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
And I completely agree with you about fifty shades of grey. I haven't read them personally. I heard they were pretty trashy and to stay away from them.
While I wish you could devote all your time to writing I see your point. I think part of the reason fanfiction is so amazing is that writers do it just because they love to write. There's no having to please for profit. You can take this story anywhere you want.
As always I am looking forward to Sunday. I know you said Friday comes to fast (and I am sorry for the horrible boss situation, I can sympathize) but Sunday can never come fast enough for me. Until then!

I think your story is one of the best I've read online. Honestly whenever there's a new update, I do a little mental squeal and imaginary happy dance! I love love loveee the relationship between Yami and Yugi, and I can't stop reading this story! I think I've read it at least ten times, not to mention the individual amount of times I read several chapters where there's some Yami and Yugi interaction... The interaction between the characters is just so interesting and captivating. So, kudos to you for a great story, and as ever, hope you update soon because I really love this story!

Wonderfully informative chapter. I cannot wait to see what's in store for Ryou. Always a relief to read your updates. I am thankful you have the time to do it

I am actually not a huge fan of the show so I cannot give any recommendations for Duel Monsters...I just stumbled upon your story and the plot was so spectacular I had to keep up with it :)

I also wanted to apologize for my earlier review...I wrote "Harry" a couple of times. I reviewed one story right after the other and got the names mixed up. Sorry about that!

It's interesting...I know that it was common for slaves to be shared and for personal modesty to be nil...but I would kind of think that Yami would make it clear to them all that Yugi belongs to him and him only and not want to share. I wonder if that would make Yugi more agreeable? Also I would love to see Kuriboh make an appearance! He's so darn cute :) Thanks for the update