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June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hope you get a chance to update soon!
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June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really looking forward to your next update. Hope it's soon XD
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June 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm completely in love with this story. The world building is great, the characters are believable and realistic. I really like how you show how different the culture is - especially through Yami and Yugi's actions, reactions, and thoughts - without it seeming set-up, you know?
Your dialog and character interactions are great. I can visualise it all in my head. And the mystery!
Your dialog and character interactions are great. I can visualise it all in my head. And the mystery!
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June 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. You've raised the stakes up to a whole 'nother level with the having a child/drugging conflict, and then the added a mysterious undertone with what attacked Yugi and what caused the plane to fail. My thoughts: Is it the rebellion? Or was it just a coincidence? Is it being engineered by the hikaris? How is Yugi going to react to being drugged? Will she actually become pregnant from one time? I can't wait to find out!
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June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, actually quite brilliant! I love the world you paint and how it affects people and their interactions, like people from different times with different code. And then the background plot of the attack on Yugi and rebellion makes it even more mysterious... So, simply, I adore your setting!
Your dialogue is even better! :) Jou and Seto are very enjoyable to read and your other characters are just as crazy with just enough personality so they're different enough :) I love Yugi here...
I wish you and your muse happy writing!
Your dialogue is even better! :) Jou and Seto are very enjoyable to read and your other characters are just as crazy with just enough personality so they're different enough :) I love Yugi here...
I wish you and your muse happy writing!
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June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved the update and always look forward to reading the next...but I do feel like the stories has become a bit stagnant...nothing has really happened over the last few chapters
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June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I find Yugi/Yami's relationship so fascinating. The level of manipulation and justification on Yami's part astounds me.Though it makes much more sense to know that he considers himself a god. I've never read a story like this before - where Yami's past life brings up so many cultural problems. It is so original and captivating. Thank you for the update. As always I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw Seto is definitely going to needs his rod! Lol. And Yugi and Ryou! I bet they hate having to deal with these harem girls :D. I can't believe you drugged Yugi!! (but it was pretty great)
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June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I didn't see this update until now!! My two favorite hikaris are at it again! Poor Yugi...he was quite taken advantage of with those drugs. I wonder if a pregnancy will come from this event? I can't imagine him being happy about being drugged! And Jou...Kaiba should really take it easy on him. But maybe not since those scenes are always so fun to read ;)
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June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...poor Jou! When you said you had something to rile him up again I never expected that!! XD And poor Yugi! He is so adorably innocent. It's horrible for Yami to take advantage of him like that. I'm not sure if I like these harem girls....