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I cannot wait to find out what Bakura does to the little slut who hurt his Tenshi ^_^

Wonderfully written chapter! You definitely picked up the pace. I love all the banter between the Yamis and Hikaris! "I told you you would call my name" LOL. Thanks for the chapter :D

Gosh with the chapter title I thought something really bad was about to happen. I am completely obsessed with this story. Like, I've got it bookmarked as a favourite and continuously wait for it to be updated. I feel pathetic now, nah, it's dedication I hope. c: you use the right words in their interactions without downgrading their personalities and just OMG, it's really good. I eagerly await the next chapter. c:

Ah, I finally had time to sit down and read this. If it is hard for me to do that I think it is simply amazing that you have the time, motivation and perseverance to write this story. I do want you to know that we all appreciate your dedication - I look forward to your weekly update.

As for names I do really like Ammon which means to be concealed or hidden. Kaphiri is also a favorite but it means hill (so maybe not the best choice for symbolic reasons).Maybe Khnemu which means model? Tehuti which means god of earth, sky, air and sea? Just to give you some ideas...I'm sure whatever you pick will be best :)

Again, thank you for all your hard work. It really gives me something to look forward to.

I am so glad you updated! I couldn't wait another week. You definitely sound pretty darn busy! But that was an amazing chapter - very active. Thanks for putting aside the time to write and update!

Ryou is absolutely adorable when he's jealous. And Bakura is so amusingly infuriating when he listens in to Ryou's every thought and decision. It seems Ryou has already started changing back, for better or worse

But wow, Yugu was in quite a pique this chapter. I loved the attitude. And as always Jou was entertaining. It's interesting to see what a calming effect Seto can have on him.

I'm really starting to wonder what is going on with the lights and attacks. I am really looking forward to finding out how it is resolved.

As for names, I have always liked Bakari which I believe means promising.

*cheers* I was so excited to see you updated. It was a very fast-paced, entertaining chapter. I'm really looking forward to the next update.

Aw I love a jealous Ryou...so adorable. And Yugi is so stubborn!! And Jou is Jou. Your characters are so endearing. I really can't believe Yami had Yugi beaten though. XD Thanks for the update!

Your story is really made by the complicated relationships between the characters. It is so odd...they obviously all care for one another and yet they continuously hurt or defy the other in pursuit of the "right" thing. Poor Yugi was beaten on Yami's orders, but Yami must be so frustrated/confused by Yugi's continuous defiance. Ryou is ever the pleaser and it is obvious that Bakura feels most strongly for him. Yet even they are hitting bumps due to their cultural differences. It is nice to see Jou get some reassurance from Kaiba. Those two are absolutely adorable! In some ways it is good for Jou to have someone to temper him...but let's hope Kaiba doesn't take it too far!

*sobs uncontrollably* I need to know what happens next. I still wish you could spend all day writing so I could spend all day reading this lovely story. As always I am looking forward to your next update (obviously) whenever that may be. I hope life is treating you well. Until then!