rate_review Reviews

Wonderful chapter. It was a very intense way to let Yugi know that Yami is still alive. But oh so Bakura-like to take advantage of the "shrimp's" absence. I am so looking forward to Sunday (or whenever you can) :D

Missing your update. :( I'm dying to know what happens next!

Oh boy...my internet has been down and I've been frantically trying to read this story. Interesting developments! I can't wait to see what happens next XD

I just want to tell you how much I love this story. I find there are very few stories where the characters seems so real and authentic. Yours are definitely some of the best around in that respect.

An other great chapter that I think will be in my favorites because OH MY GOD I found Yugi oddly cute x) It may be weird but the way he is always confused about his feelings for Yami makes him (to me) cute x) More even I love it when Ryou is jealous and possessive, I don't really know why since IRL I would hate it but yeah, in stories I really like it ?
Anyway, your writing is, again, amazing and I am looking forward to the journey and the battles!

For a "set-up" chapter this was really quite entertaining...I really have no idea what is going to happen next. I can't wait to read more!

Okay:

1. YOU KILLED YAMI!?!?! I really feel for Yugi right now...and Ryou! How has Bakura not thought about him?

2. So....Honda. I did not see that one coming. And Bakura and Marik were in on it? I didn't see that one either...they seemed pretty loyal to Yami, or at least tolerant. Are they just pretending to follow him?

3. Jou...haha. Gotta love him.

4. Just out of curiosity - is this story kind of close to the end? I am both excited (to finally know everything) and dreading (I just never want it to end) the end to this story.

5. I'm really sorry you're sick. I wish you a quick recovery. Thank you, thank you for the update!

Well that was unexpected. What happened to not killing off characters? And the betrayal is so in line with Bakura and Marik's "usual" characters and yet as you said, I'm sure nothing is as it seems. I am wondering if Seto is aware of the betrayal? Are they all just playing along? And why, if Honda is okay with Yugi being of the ruling class, did the shadow initially attack Yugi? I am hoping that Bakura swoops in to save Ryou soon. It is a bummer that you are sick. Get plenty of fluids and rest and feel better soon. This chapter was amazing. I am looking forward to what happens next.

Aw poor Yugi. He has such conflicted emotions towards Yami. I was really hoping Ryou would get rescued this chapter...there is just so much going on! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Amazing story! I can't wait until your next update.