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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finish this please, it can't end like this!
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Especially the Bakura one (since I'm a huge Bakura fan!!!!)!! Great job! So hot !!! ^^ WHOOO
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Yami is so hott!! I hope you make another one with yami in it!
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a bit confused it has potential but you need to state the authors perspective of the story and work out the 'person' (1st person, 2nd person, 3rd person, omnesient) you want the story to be told in - and stick to it. Has great descriptive work in it . Great start