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Quite the mind-fuck there, Sal.

But I enjoyed it immensely.

'Ko

P.S. Angst-whore is still waiting for you to say when she can have your babies...

Damn you Sal, this is going to be one long review. . . .

In all honesty, I thought something would happen to Mokuba, as that soul needed to be reunited. But why did Jou lose the plot? Okay, he was told that Kaiba killed his sister, but did he? You never did say what happened at the tournament. And it wouldn't surprise me if sweet little Yuugi didn't do something to send Jou off the deep end. Moswen was put in his position, but he never seemed controlling. Yuugi appears to be the one in control, even though it looks like Yami is taking care of him. Too sweet, too innocent, too much of a 'good' thing? Pollyanna with poison up his sleeve?


You might want to leave this fic verse for awhile, but there is certainly a third story here. There are things that still have to be answered, solved, explained etc etc.

Yami is very dependent on Yuugi, too dependent as far as I'm concerned (but then who am I in the scheme of things)

Is Kaiba now 'whole'. Does he remember, does he have answers? Is Mokuba dead? REally dead? Kaiba seems to calm for someone who just lost a brother. . .even if his soul is now whole. . .

And even though Yami refers to Seto as a 'lover' he still is bound by the past. Can he ever get beyond it and create a new future, minus Yuugi?

As I said earlier, Damn you Sal. . . this is no happily ever after ending, this isn't even an ending. . it's more of an apex, with (at the moment) no solution in sight.

Did I enjoy it - I don't know, it all depends on if this is it.
If it is, then I feel as if I've been left in mid air waiting for a mythical ending to appear.(ducking for cover, as author runs after her with bat in hand)
bahen

Good chapter. Poor Mokuba the only innocent in all this.

Good chapter. I hope there is a third part. This doesn't seem to be ending well.

Good chapter. Seto is mean and yet not. What will happen to Yuugi and Jou? I think that those two once they have settled their differences will be good together. Maybe Yuugi and Jou together? I love it.

I'm glad you know where you are going with this, because I sure has hell don't. Mokuba (the silent conscience,) just stands there and watches. - O kaaay. . .

(I know I said no more questions, so I lied. . .lol) What does he know, and how much does he understand? If he's the angel, then he's not a very active one, is he?

I'm sure the bondage part took place in the basement of this very strange house. So the first floor is dead egypt? the Goazabura years?, second floor life, basement. . hell? redemption? rebirth?

Yami is not Atemu - yet. If Kaiba is able to 'rebuild him' will he be a combination of the 2, or will the Atem personality dominate, thus recreating the Seth personality in Kaiba (which though more sympathetic really might not be a good thing as then the old cycle from the past might restart. . .

And of course there is the question of Yugi. Where does he fit in the mess?

I can go on and on, but the good news is I won't (for now. . .lol)

Looking forward to the next update. .
bahen

AGood chapter. I hope Kaiba will help them even Jou.

OK, no more questions because you are not going to answer them are you? What I think? Symbolically, I think Yugi is a blood sucker. He cannot be left on his own, but needs someone constantly around. Hence his fear when Yami tells him he is going, but turns calm when he hears he will be left with Jou and then lies next to him, craving contact of sorts.

Mokuba - well so far he seems to be the only voice of reason in this story. Perhaps the only sane one as well. Would love to see a chapter that lets us read his notebook. I'm sure his thoughts would shed some light here.

Would still like to know the tournament story. Hope you do tell it and not gloss over. I'm still hoping that Yami got it wrong and Kaiba is not the villian in that story. Or at least not the total villian. . .

Look forward to the next update - whenever it comes
bahen

Good chapter. Kaiba really is a bastard. I wonder if it left over from ancient times. Of course, it is. He still can't forgive the two of them. I hope the three together can succeed.

Good chapter. Kaiba sees himself as dead unless Mokuba is with him. I guess he won't be helping Yami and Yugi anytime soon. Unless he has them take Joeu's place. Yugi seems to be very simple minded and not bothered by anything in their lives.