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Don't worry if your story has some grammar or spelling mistakes, the most important part is that your are trying. "Those who criticize others often are not perfect, either" but "constructive criticism most be always appreciated". Try to appreciate advice, sometimes criticism can be hard to take but many times is good-hearted and sometimes people just want to be mean. Is very easy to talk, criticize and insult others. The most important is to keep trying, improve your skills, don't give up and turn a deaf ear to foolish words.

That was HOT!!!!!!!!!

Jouseme x Setouke is so great!!!!!!

Please continue!!!!

I really do like this story. It is intense with all these mixed emotions and it is very hot too^^.

But I really don't understand Jou... why is he acting that way? I mean he got sex like he wanted and Seto is vey kind with him. He even asked Jou to beat him if that will make him feel better. So why? He is angry from what exactly?

As for Seto... I really pity him. He's really touching trying to save his relationship with Jou.

Can't wait for the next chapter. This story is so original!

Update please!

OMG!!!! that was soooooooooooooo hoooooooooooooooooooot!!! After chapter 3, I think in some way I can understand them, they use to have sex but they never had real intimacy, they love each other but they never share each other, sex was just a requirement in their relationship, they never give themselves completely, that was missing, they were too afraid of doing something wrong that they didn't do anything at all!!. They not only have sexual problems, that is just one part of the problem, the real root of the problem is that they don't have good communication and it seems thay need to trust each other more deeply. All that wasted passion. You don't think love, you feel it!!!. They really need to let go and don't think too much just feel. Maybe it's rough but I think they are finally making love to each other, is so ironic, maybe it's a little bit scary for them right now, but I think they were sexually frustraded, they need to burn down first all that pent-up desire and then maybe they will be able to find a more balance sexual life, because right now they jumped from one extreme to the other. They need to open up and know each other better, because their relationship is not going well either, bad sex was a consequence of that. It's a very interesting story, because is common that couples think that bad sex life is a sexual problem, when the problem goes more deep than that, please keep writing, I would love to read more about this one.

yeah, dat was a lot different!! lol but i liked it, da ice trick was so original!! ive never seen anything lik it, lol, but it was weird seeing Kaiba-sama beg!!><
it took me way too long to get to reading this, im ashamed!! ive been really busy though, so i do have a good reason. but still *sighs* well im glad i could finally read it, it was worth it!!!^-^
great lik always!!continuing sounds good to me!!^-^

go Jou

That was good^^

It would be great if you can continue it into a story, to see how the relationship between Jou and Seto will improve from now on and how they will get more and more comfortable with each other.

I would love to read more!!! What is going on with Seto? Well, I hope he is really Seto!!!!!... The sex scenes were HOT!!!

Me too I want to know what happen to Seto^^ (even though I have an idea...)

Anyway that was HOT!!! UkeSeto is always great (especially with a seme Jou)

Continue!

NEAT STORY!! i CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!