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This Dan is defenitly a perv...poor Jou

Anyway, I LOVE this story. I find it really great!

Please continue it and update soon!

I haven't forgotten about you or this story, I simply have not had a reliable internet connection for a few weeks. The story is taking an interesting twist, I await the next chapter to find out what happens.

Please don't stop!!! I love this story is just that I had visits at home and I was no able to check your story!! I love the way they are finding a way to be together and You are killing me here, I want to know what are they going to do about the crazy guy!!!

yay another ch!! still love it!! but da last part..><
Kaiba-sama was adorable!! im glad their getting along again, i hope da guy at da end doesn't cause um more trouble, Dan? cant stand him, screwing wit um...><
well nice ch, cant wait to read more!!!^-^
ur getting really good wit da detail!! i love it!!(again)lol^-^

I suppose that the guy at the end is Dan ( Hate him! he's obsessed or what?)

Anyway, another AWESOME chapter. It was intense, strong, everything. You know so well how to transmit the feelings of Seto and Jou. I really do like the way you write ^^

And your lemons are hot!

This story is so good ^^

Please update!

hope jou will be O.K

Dan needs to get a life and get over Joey before I have to kick his ass and then I'm pretty sure Seto will kill him. I loved how long the chapter was this time!

Hope they finally find a road to solve their problems! They really love each other! But a balanced relationship is not about one being Seme and the other being Uke, to love is to give not only to take, they would have a healthier relationship if they share the power because both are always fighting for the power, they have strong personalities, so they need to share themselves completely, like equals, the only way this two will be happy if they see each other as equals. Is different when in a couple one of them is very happy to submit to the other but I don't feel this is the case. Great job, I'm biting my nails!!!!

It was awesome!!!

The fighting scene was great!!! I loved how Jou was trying to restrain Seto. I mean it is good that he didn't make him leave but "forced" him to stay. That was violent but yet so deep and intense. We can sense very well the sadness of Jou and Seto.

And the lemon was hot.

I am happy that they have managed to solve this problem with Dan. I was really afraid that this incident with Dan might have messed up completely their relationship.

Can't wait for more. This story is so good. Please update!

Oh this is getting REALLY good now! I really feel sorry for those two, so full od anger and rage... but I hope they are able to work things out.