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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* you are really talented, i love these stories
i must also thankyou for mentioning the fantastic song 'TNT for the brain' by Enigma, not to mention seto and joey listening to it while wrong doings were talking place *drools* :L
please keep it up, i cant wait till the next one x
lots of love frazbo ^-^
i must also thankyou for mentioning the fantastic song 'TNT for the brain' by Enigma, not to mention seto and joey listening to it while wrong doings were talking place *drools* :L
please keep it up, i cant wait till the next one x
lots of love frazbo ^-^
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an incredible, mature, deep story!!!
It is so realistic!
Each chapter is so good and each lemon too ^^ The lemon of this chapter was really beautiful with Seto wearing a mask.
Finally Jou quit his job! but this doesn't mean that Dan will not be around.
As for Mokuba, what is he up to?
And things still confused and messed up between our two lovers even though the relation has improved a lot between them. I mean Jou is still have angry feelings towards Seto... and he will for sure blame him (*maybe*) for quitting his job.
Yay can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update!
It is so realistic!
Each chapter is so good and each lemon too ^^ The lemon of this chapter was really beautiful with Seto wearing a mask.
Finally Jou quit his job! but this doesn't mean that Dan will not be around.
As for Mokuba, what is he up to?
And things still confused and messed up between our two lovers even though the relation has improved a lot between them. I mean Jou is still have angry feelings towards Seto... and he will for sure blame him (*maybe*) for quitting his job.
Yay can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new chapter!
I was so excited when I saw you had updated.
Poor Joey! But it's all for the best.
Dan must go down...and soon.
Anticipating the next installment!
=D
I was so excited when I saw you had updated.
Poor Joey! But it's all for the best.
Dan must go down...and soon.
Anticipating the next installment!
=D
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting harder and harder, poor guys, when are they going to be able to have peace???!!! Damn Dan, you bastard leave them alone, you are ruining everything, you, you, YOUUUUUUU DAMN SICKOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Love the story :P
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...fuck the grammar.
I enjoy this story so much...
I don't even care anymore.
This story is so inspirational to me,
that I cannot get enough of it.
It is beautifully written...
And finally!
Someone touches on a real angsty Kaiba/Joey relationship.
I love this story and I need you to continue.
Fantastic story.
=D
I enjoy this story so much...
I don't even care anymore.
This story is so inspirational to me,
that I cannot get enough of it.
It is beautifully written...
And finally!
Someone touches on a real angsty Kaiba/Joey relationship.
I love this story and I need you to continue.
Fantastic story.
=D
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brillant chapter!
That was so good! Deep and touching. I really don't know what to say. I love so much this fic. It is very realistic and so sweet ^^
I am happy that the problem with Mokuba is kind of solved. At least he accepted Seto as he is.
And Seto is gonna propose to Jou. Yay!!!!!
And your lemons are HOT!!!
I really do like everything you write in this story.
Please continue!
That was so good! Deep and touching. I really don't know what to say. I love so much this fic. It is very realistic and so sweet ^^
I am happy that the problem with Mokuba is kind of solved. At least he accepted Seto as he is.
And Seto is gonna propose to Jou. Yay!!!!!
And your lemons are HOT!!!
I really do like everything you write in this story.
Please continue!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesomness, please continue? <3
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING!!! you know I love how you deal with all the psychological implications in the story. I love this story because is very mature, real people, real problems, most important is that their problems didn't disappear like magic, is very real the way they are dealing with their troubles. Keep writing please girl, love this story and I'm dying to know hoy Seto is going to punish Dan!!!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry that you are not getting the reviews that you want, but some are like that. It is a good read and each chapter I have always rated, even if I didn't leave a review. So far well done, and I do look forward to your next chapter
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapters