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Nooooooooooo!
I hate Dan!
He gets in the damn way,
of their already messed up relationship.
Ugh!
Cannot wait till the next chapter.
=D

I love you an I hate you, I love to hate you and I hate to love you because you always left me bitting my nails!!! And what I understood about Mokie being seductive is that he was trying to seduce Seto to make him put down his defences but not as far as... you know!, so I think I got the seductive part, I didn't miss the line!!, that means he was playing but he was playing very hard so they are close but not that close!, Does that makes any sense?? @.@ Sorry, English is not my native language, don't know how to express better the idea, but I think I understand the sexy part, anyway love your work, you are killing me here, this chapter was very heavy, has a lot of psychological stuff O.o' that is very interesting, how love in someway can be turned into hate! Our mind is somethig wonderful but it is scary at the same time, humans have sometimes terrible reactions to suffering. Excellent as always, keep the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter.¢¾¢¾¢¾

oh wow...that was a really intense chapter, i feel really bad for seto and joey (that bloomin dan, i'm gonna kill him myself :L)

please keep it up, your fanfiction is brilliant! ^-^

lots of love, frazbo x

I.
Love.
This.
Fucking.
Story.
=D
and Enigma.

lol the mokuba and seto scene made me laugh xD it was also very spicy and lemony fresh!

muchas love *huggles* x

I love the chapter, Mokie is so funny, I don't think their relationship is wrong, they just trust each other a lot and they are very close. I understand if you don't like incest, I don´t like it either but in this case I didn't feel it like incest, they didn't kiss or touch each other in an improper way, Mokie was just trying to convince his brother to trust him, it simply was another version of pouting and batting eyelashes ha ha ha. Love the way Seto and Jou need each other so much, was so sexyyyyy!!! Great chapter, NEED TO READ NEXT ONE!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee... *puppy eyes* *pouting* *batting eyelashes* ha ha ha :P

Once again, awesome chapter!
I kept waiting for something odd, and then it was over and I was like, wait, what did I miss? Kaiba and Mokubas relationship didnt seem odd, me and my sis are that way, there just real close XP

*sniffles* that was such a feiry and passionate chapter, i loved the pervertedness of it, i hope that they take down that bastard Dan! he is even pissing me off! *laughs*

please keep writing, i love this story to pieces xxx

Are you kidding me?!?! this chapter was everything but boring!

Actually it was GREAT ! (like all the previous chapters ^^). Have I ever mentioned how much I love the depth and maturity of your story ? ^^

And that without mentioning the HOT lemons that you always write.

I enjoyed reading this chapter!

Great plan from Seto. I haven't expected that from him.

Can't wait to see what is gonna happen next!

Please update!

The only way I am going to forgive their suffering is if you give Dan 100% more suffering!!! My poor babies!!! Don't be cruel and save me from my misery, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I love the way they are finally trusting each other and having better communication, great chapter!!! Need more so write faster because I'm dying here!