rate_review Reviews

o.o...that...was amazing! YAY! DAN'S DEAD THE BUGGER!!! (and he dies as he lived, draped in the arms of another man...well...sort of ^-^)

please keep writing, i love it more and more each chapter x

lots of love,

frazbo x (frazzle x)

Oh God finally all this is over! I was going to kill Dan with my own hands!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This monster !

I wonder what is gonna happen next with Seto and Jou. I suppose that Jou will be affected for a while about this traumatic experience.

Anyway, can't wait to see what is gonna happen next. Hope that the next chapter will be a little less darker (or maybe much less darker ^^). Jou really needs some vacations as well as Seto (*witnessing his love being raped in front of him must have been a traumatizing sigh as well*)

Please update!

Do you know how amazing you are???!!! This chapter was great!! The best part is the way Dan died and I enjoyed so much!!! It was a great chapter, love it!!! But now comes a very difficult moment, how are they going to heal their psychological wounds. Poor Mokuba, to feel useless when someone you love needs help, is one of the greates pains that exist. Great work and I'm dying to read the next part.

Dan...Dan...Dan...
What a sick bastard.
Making Kaiba watch?
Wowsers. Things got crazy fast.
I hope things work out okay.
Awesome chapter.
=D

OMG! AHH! Poor seto and joey! How are they going to escapeeee?
I love how you kinda worked backwards with the storyline btw

Oh my God! I can't believe that! I went for only two weeks of vacations and I came back to see that four chapters have already been updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh man things have turned on in a dramatic way... poor Jou and Seto. I really do feel very sad for them. I can't believe that Dan has even been able to catch Seto.

I really wonder what is gonna happen now. I do hope that there will be a happy ending.

I loved the last four chapters. Very sad and deep.

Update!

aww, poor Joey and Seto :( ...that Dan is a meanie *mumbles*

as i have said before, love the story, please keep it up ^-^

lots of love,

frazbo x

I usually don't read this kind of stories but I'm going to stay with you until the end, I want to know how are you going to end it. I admire the way you handle the psychological stuff, is hard to read some parts because the story is getting darker and darker, but at the same time is very interesting how you write your characters, the way they think and how they react. Very interesting story that talks about 3 sick minds, Jou, Seto and Dan, sick because of different reasons but they are sick in different ways and levels. I think Dan must die or they will never have peace, he is not going to leave them alone. Seto and Jou still need to talk a lot and help each other to fight their demons, now more than ever after all this caos comes to an end. I have a big problem because your story is hard to read but I can't stop doing it. Great Work, can't wait to read what is next.

No!!! Dont hang out with Dan!! AHHH!!!!!!

*twitches* nooo! joey must stay with setooo!! *cries* you've made me sad now :L

nah not really, i love your story!!

lots of love

frazbo x