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Ummmm(guilty)sorry sweetie, "angle face",I cheated. You see I'm the type of person who knows what's in every present under the Christmas Tree before they're opened Christmas Day (peeking through wrapping is a specialty with me). So, to make a looong reason/excuse short, I did what I always do, with surprises. I peeked. I swear I was going to read just the one chapter. But ya know wah happened? I read the whole thing. Not even stopping to comment when I really wanted to. Ergo, I decided that as punishment (ya right, more like pleasure) I will read/review each new chapter posted here (pats self on back, for thinking of a good idea) just to make it up to you. I will try, very hard, not to mention any "spoilers". By the way it was awesome! C ya next chapter.

poor yug he needs his friends to put two and two together
J-chan

19!!!Oh man now I feel really old *pouts* but as hubby would say ‘don’t mind her she’s just havin’ a second (or is it third) childhood) and yeah it was my birthday and I had a good one as well,

Well time to review I suppose…You can’t really blame Tavi for looking it is a great story, it’s just that I felt a tad guilty about reading this last time and not reviewing, so I thought I’d read this as if I’d never read it before or I might get carried away with the reviews and get ahead of myself. (you know that made more sense when I thought it >.<)

You know I would have thought that if malik and jou were yugi’s friends thay woud have and could have respected yugi’s desire to keep what happened to himself, but we will see…

How else cheered when Atemu showed up in time to save Hikari, I know I did, I can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Okay where the hell did the rest of my review go??
Oh well then…review con’t…
it's a shame about the attitude of Marik and Jou, I would have thought that if they were good friends to Yugi then surely they would have and could have respected his wish to keep what happened to himself?
I wonder who else cheered when Atemu arrived in time to save Hikari? I know I did…I can’t wait for the next chapter..

Awesome idea for a story and awesome first chappies =D I can't wait for more!

-Emily

huh Must you be so weird in your fics Moond and uh hate to break it to ya but ya kinda overlapped a few years like how the hell did Yugi meet Atemu again and what not kinda overlooked that part a tad and I dont know if it was you or the site but either way I dun like it but I love the fic though even if I"m getting as annoyed in an amused fashion over your cliffies and your abuse of Yami's mommy least this time you DIDNT kill the poor woman instead ya took it out on Yugi.

So I'm gonna let you off easy this once *she puts Moondalian into a bubble ball and holds her up at the top of a very tall hill* enjoy *shoves her down it* and yes I'm back after a several year vanishing act I"M GOOD mwahahaha

Gah! Damn cliffhangers! Now I have to reread on ff!!! *sniff* ugh, I'm not sure which is worse right now, malfunctioning equipment or clingy family members who have nothing to do other than bitch at me to get their shit done! *tears at hair* I will most definitely try to be on this weekend - especially since I think I'm going to tell certain people to go to hell! *nods* *and then mumbles* As if that would work...not! Anyways, great chap and now I'm off to reread cause I can't remember what happened next and I'm that kind of impatient ass! C'ya!

Good chapter. Happy Birthday. I hope your party was fun.

Well a happy birthday to you, and have a grreat time at your party! In the meantime, thanks for a great chapter. I glad you took the time to update. Can't wait till the next one. Till then C ya!

**bouces about** WOOT FIGHTING!
J-chan