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**is curled up on a couch**nift so now only Atemu is in the dark hehehehehehe he's ganna be sore about that but they found out well cause if they didn't he would be a splotch on a wall
J-chan

very nicely done at least things are getting back to normal now so I'll let ya live for now *she tosses a bunch of Yami Yugi and Hikari plushies at her till she was covered in them as well as a banquet of sweets from desserts to candies to all sorts of treats* but dont expact it to last to long and dont take forever updating next time or I'll have to chain ya to your comp hehe nyways keep up the good work and update asap JA NE

I really liked this chapter...I'm happy now Atemu and Hikari are not fighting any more, and the way Yugi's friends found out he was Hikari, and then showing some humility when finding out his reasons for not telling them who he was, was nicely written. Now all that's left is for Atemu to find out...
Marik and Bakura have new tricks up their sleeves, this can't be good...more please

bah poor atem is getting all neglected over here. when are he and yugi going to make up????!!! i wanna see how atem finds out.

Good glad to see things are turning around now all that remains is Atemu *she turns off the laser* so for now your safe for how long depends on your next chappie so keep up the good work gtg Ja

Ah poor Yugi first he fights with his friends but now with Atemu as well? you are cruel, I hope Atemu and Yugi make up soon *looks pointedly at Moondalian* but I am glad that his friends have come to terms with his need for privacy, even if they are going to try and find out about it another way.
As for good plotlines, I object you DO have good ones what about 'Hold On' and 'Let Go' amongst two of them I really, really enjoyed them, not to mention 'Sportsday: The day we all DIE' that has got to be one of the best comedy oneshots I have read. *I'll shut up now'*
I guess the 'angelface' worked I'm going, I'm going...

Poor Yuugi. At least, friends who are also too stubborn for their own good; gave a little, even if they have a spying plan. I'm sure one of the other stubborn nes, either Atemu or Yuugi will give in and make up too. You are slipping, there is no cliffie in this chapter. Wonderful chapter.

O'key dokey. Will do penance. Though first, I will do self appointed punishment. So this chapter is just about "blonds" being "blonds" and Pharaoh, acting blond as well. So it's just the "calm before the storm" (cliquishly much?). Neat chapter anyways. Gotta go do other penance. Got one request though answer, if you can, who am I on ff.net? C ya next chapter.

I'm glad Ryou stayed to help him. Jou is his best friend he shouldn't have snapped like that. Oh well, I hope they make up in time. Good chapter.

Oh sure life goes on but its fucking BULLSHIT *she glares at Malik and Jou* HONESTLY YOU IDIOTS THINK WOULD YOU theres only few reasons in the current situation that Yugi would get injuries like that and gee think if we know Yugi like we SHOULD then we know HE"D NEVER WANT TO PUT YOU INTO THE SAME DANGER HE"S IN *she grabs Akun* and I aint done with you fucktard this is all your fault and your gonna pay for it *slams him into a wall and let rip on him venting her anger on him full force* ITS YOUR FAULT YUGI"S THIS WAY ITS YOUR FAULT HE CANT TELL HIS BEST FRIENDS OR EVEN THE PHARAOH NOW huh ok I'm done screaming for now but either way great work as always Moond even if it fucking sucks big ass monkey balls that Yugi has to go through this cause of this shithead but either way update asap *she points a high powered laser at Moond* or else