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YAY now i iz happy. one last person seaking your harm!!! lol now we just gotta work on atem remembering yugi ^_^

Oh poor Yugi! Having to watch his friends being taken by Bakura and Marik, I’m really glad he didn’t hurt Atemu when he pounced on him.
Wow what a way for Atemu to find out who Hikari really is (and gets to see him naked to-boot), I’m glad that all Yugi’s fears were laid to rest and Atemu didn’t lose his respect for him. At least Jou is going to be kept safe, life at the palace eh? Something tells me life is going to get interesting…It seems they already are for Malik and Ryou.

Can't wait to read the one-shot...

arnt you suppose to be visiting tavi?...here Im trying to figure out where Cedar Point is and you are updating...

*starts blasing her with laser fire before she surounds her with all kinds of automatic and semi automatic guns going rapid fire at her feet to get her to start moving* and this will stop when you've updated and put Yugi out of his misery now if you excuse me *goes mother* I got some mother hening to do *she marches over grabs Joey Malik and Ryou's ears and starts scolding them fiercely* BAKA GA's you happy now thanks to you Yugi's hurt they know your his friends and iwll drill into to see if you know who he is MORONS you could have very well costed them BOTH the entire nation preen with pride you three you in serious trouble for this

ok done now but i'm not gonna stop the weapons till you finish to *snaps a whip* march and if you good quick and updated soon I'll give you a full sized Yami and Yugi to snugle into with no shirts on JA NE

Nice chapter. I wonder what Bakura and Mariku are going to do with their captives? Especially Malik the little spitfire won't be easy to tame.

Good grief now there’s a shocker! Seth liking Hikari…and Teana’s jealous, heh go figure.
Well that wasn't very nice!, taking Malik and Ryou as hostages, oh this can’t be good, but I suppose it ws their fault thay should have got the hell otut of there. I hope Yugi is not hurt too badly and can find his friends soon before they too get hurt.
See ya next week!!!

**hug** its ok plot bunnies are everywhere
j-chan

AAAAAAAAAAH bad, no cliff hangers!!! this story is getting more action pacted goodness. i cant wait to see what happens, especally with that sneak peak! what will atem do to snap him out of his angry mode. im excited, update soon, please? ill with hold back my revenge if you update earlier then a week?? maybe? it was worth a shot

I love how you've made Yugi a hero, he's usually the weak one in most fanfic's. This story is great, i love a good boy x boy story with an acutal plot ^^ keep up the good work!

(sorry if there are any spelling mistaks -.-)

you need more fluff...or...you know...have atem figure out who the lion is.. GEEZ!!! it would be cool if he some how told yugi that he remembered him from that day..or something. baaaaah im impatient. i lvoe the story by the way...these stones i have piled here are just insurance that you will continue...you will continue, right?