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for Lion Heart

by LeilaLogan

person Evil Pharaoh Atem
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah youre coming to the US? meaning youre out of the country. cool ^^ hope ya have fun over here. where are you from anyway???

oh and about your chapter...my guess is that shes gonna find bakura and them and tell them who hiraki is and then bad stuff follows

just my guess though
person catti
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story...will throw tomatoes at tavi if she keeps you from updating...laughs...not really...hope you have fun with tavi and just remember I am sooo jealous...laughs...catti
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I am so excited about tomorrow. I couldn't sleep earlier and hope I have better luck tonight. I can't believe it is finally happening and you will be here. I know what Teana is going to do so I won't guess.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yaoi yaoi i demand me some mmm mmm good puzzleshipping yaoi lol <3 good chapter, cant wait for next week
person Keara
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not my fault you make it ooh so easy besides *holds up Yugi* look at him can you really look into those sweet tender eyes and not wanna bash tear and all around annhilate and mutilate even the tiniest thing that causes hiiim hurt.

Y:*gives Moondalian his most sweetest smille and cutest puppy dog eyes*

Yeah you just trying disaggreeing to what I said with that infront of ya anyways great work and keep up the great work asap this is getting highly amusing now *sighs in joy* nothing more relieving then seeing those two banter back and forth even at Tea *snickers*
person Cosmic Tomato
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can just imagine Seth’s face when confronted by Hikari’s true form, and I had to laugh at the comment Yugi made to him, but I'm glad they are both safe, thought I have wonder about poor Jou...
Talking of which Seth recognised Jou eh?, ooh this should be an interesting relationship a very interesting relationship.
I’m glad Atemu semi-recognised Yugi, it was nice to see that he hadn’t forgotten the small boy he thought was dead…
A challenge between Yugi and Teana? well we all know who’ll win that one, don’t we. I can’t wait to read more.

Enjoy your holiday...don't do anything I wouldn't do...Oh hell just have loads of fun.^___^
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Teana is still a bitch. I hope they can ge rid of her soon. For Catti, Cedar Point is in Ohio. I can't wait to see you and Tavi. Just one more week!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>.> **pounces Yuugi and cuddles him** K, now I know I'm ganna die but it was worth it! **runs and hides**
J-chan
person ravanwolf
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess I need a bran... I have no idea who the 'him' might be. On the other hand, this is brilliant. I look forward to more
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Teana needs to die. She is such a bitch with her unfounded jealousy and stupidity. I hope they can get rid of her soon.