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Great chapter. I'm glad Malik and Ryou got away from whoever was guarding them. Zork better be careful or Mariku is going to turn on him.

ya know, its really not that hard to put a good disclaimer in your fic. Instead you make yourself look stupid by acting like a scolded child. Its for your protection so the creators don't sue your ass. Hell, you nearly do it in your profile, all you gotta do is say you don't make any money.

Not hard at all...

Woohoo they finally confessed and really Seth could you b nymore of a tightass if you tried *rolls her eyes* geese your a moron and Moond dear if you keep up with these cliffies your boyos are gonna go on strike trust me DragonDreamer had teh same problem with Ryou

Now on a funnier note *she pulls out a vid that shows Bakura naked covered in blood blood drunk and esclaiming to the world I'm The Queen of Shebe Behold me in all my glory"* weee *ducks outa there before Bakura can kill her for this* enjoy teh blackmail guys mwahahahaha and update asap Moond *holds up a Kitten Yugi who holds his paws together ina pleading way eyes all cute and sparkly* or I wont stop the kawaii Kitten look

*giggles*..love the story and if you tell us to come to FF.net for future updates, we will come...you can always start your story with all CAPs disclaimer, that should annoy AFF or you loyal followers can email the head honcho with an all CAPs disclaimer of their own...*evil smirk*..Either way, we will follow you where you you decide to go...catti

Great chapter. I think your disclaimer is fine. You state you don't own Yugioh and you make no money from it. I don't get it and I read the rules.
I hope Teana stays away. Shimon is so funny and so worried about Egypt. I'm glad they all finally got together.
I hope we can all meet again.

Another awesome chapter! And yay for the kiss! Both of them! And can we get someone to stand up and say finally? But why for the love of all the gay pr0n in the world a cliffhanger?! XD

And yeah I have that same problem with the English language, I've been fluent in said language since I was 5. Half of the time I end up starting a conversation in Dutch and I'll switch languages somewhere in the middle without even realizing it. Or Japanese for that matter *speaks quite a bit of Japanese since she's quite the pitifull Otaku* XP

And yeah the Netherlands needs to get up and get it's head/ass out of the stoneage. We hardly even have decent anime (hell, we hardly have decent television period, GTST needs to die after all these years if you ask me. NO offense meant to those who like it but still. Put it out of it's misery! >.<) and when we do end up airing something we take an example from the States when it comes to dunning and make it just a tad bit worse by adding our own language. Ewwww :S

I considder myself lucky I managed to buy some yaoi manga's at animecon like two years ago, heck, we're lucky we even have a friggin' animecon D:

And you mean you actually know other dutch yaoi fans? In all my 22 years on this planet (of which I spent 11 sweet years happily fangirling XD) I've only had the pleasure of getting to know a few online through Aarinfantasy but other than that I think I freak my 'normal' friends out when I'm reading a smutty yaoi manga in public. But damnit I'm a fangirl and proud of it! D: <3

And I'm curious as to what those next fics will be about. You've gained a loyal fan X3
And glad to hear you'll be sticking around when it comes to this fandom! I'm actually motivated to do the same! *started writing a Yugioh/Yugioh 5d's crossover once but never got to finish it* X3

Also, sorry to hear about your troubles with AFF, I know what you mean about having an FF-account. I personally find FF more pleasant as well. I mean just the formatting for a story is sooooooooooo much easier. I mean the place has a story alert button, we've had like a thousand updates in this place and how many category edits? Yet a story alert button is too much to ask for and now the whole disclaimer ranting. I personally never touched the standard one so if they start complaining they'd better look at their own mistakes first...

*will stop typing now* ^_^;

And talk about disliking AFF, I think half of my review just got swallowed -_-

Aw that was nice, a little fluff goes a long way it’s about time the two had a little ‘down’ time it’s just a shame Yugi had to almost have a breakdown (nicely written by the way) for it to happen.
As for Seth just giving Jou a kiss to shut him, up that scene was great. I'm Happy Seth has finally acted on his feelings. I’ve also gotta feel sorry for Shimon, I mean he’s supposed to be the advisor to Atemu and he knows the least…what with being confused by Seth’s attitude and wondering about Atemu, I’m surprised the old man hasn’t gone crazy yet!
I liked the way you hinted as to what was happening between Atemu and Yugi in the bedroom without being graphic, to be honest I really think any type of lemon would spoil this story. But hey I guess that’s just my opinion.

poor yugi T_T it sucks to see him so sad. well he'll be happy when he finds out his friends are alive. and yay it seems something will happen with seth and joey. im happy.

I love this fic!
And here I thought the Yugioh fandom had been abandoned by nearly all of the talented authors T.T
Refreshing to read something different than the usual 'vampire' plot too. The characters especially are well-written! Hope to read more soon!

Also, you're from the Netherlands?

Dat is dus al helemaal ongelofelijk aangezien ik dacht dat Nederland dus te klein was voor zoiets 'main-stream' als yaoi. Leuk om eens een keer een (mede) Nederlandse yaoi fan te zien! :)

Gr. Kirikou