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for Don't Mess With Me

by Sands4488

person smalvina
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aya was great. thank you for the fic
person LadyWolf
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love Aya!!! She is so sneaky, so evil, so...so.. freakin' AWESOME!!! She made the entire fic!!!!

Sweet read!!
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Joey but she got them together.
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is the end????

That was very quick!

But anyway, the last chapter was hot^^ and I loved the scene in the park between Seto and Jou in the second chapter. It was so sweet.

And Aya is soo evil. But well yeah it is not me who is gonna complain XD
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those poor people. She is really messing with their lives. Good chapter. It's apologise.
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Please, don't make your OC's MarySues. So far I really like it.
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it keep going. Hehe second to post.
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's very interesting.

But who is this Aya? she seems a nice girl for wanting to help Seto and Jou get together. But it will be good if you can tell us how she became friend with a difficult person like Seto. I can't believe that she hit Seto's head with a book^^ I mean if she wasn't his friend, he would have rip her throat or something.

And Jou is so cuuuute ^^ but seing Seto all confused is even more funny.