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for While You Sleep

by SayuriNakamura

person HikariAi
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good and I like SetoxYugi stories..... plz update soon, ne...!!! ^_^
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adorable..and very feasible in the plot. I'm glad others are like me and play with pairings.
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going! A softening Seto is always nice and especially around Yugi! Keep it coming!
person esama
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I admit, I was a bit leery about this. The summary seemed like something I've seen over and over again and then gotten bored with, but this was really, really good. Your writing form has a very nice flow in it and it's very easy to read and understand. The characters are not only in character but they're also well thought out. I can't tell yet, not after a single chapter, but I think you might have nicely unique flair to your writing - and that's always a good thing. On top of that, the story itself is good and very realistically executed.

And of course, Yugi as the main character always is always a plus in my books.

I'll be watching this fic with interest.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I really like this. I'm glad Yami approves, I hope he can join too.
person HannaFO
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely writtin. Very sweet chapter :D Please do continue XD
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it! Awesome! Sorry for all the gushing, but it has been ohhhhhhhhhhhhh sooooooooo loooooooooong since a NEW, GOOD, CHAPTERED, Seto/Yugi story/fic. I don't care what you do with Yami, though a threesome is all right, but, please don't stray from it being Seto/Yugi. You don't know how long it's been since there's been a half descent fic, outside of puzzelshipping(Yami/Yugi) and a few one shots, in this fandom. PLEASE CONTINUE! SOON, hopefully..... Thanks for writing. Later

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