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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God this was good! I really like Mokuba's profile in this fic. Please update soon!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Game on!! hehe well things sure are getting steamy :D thanks for the update!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! This is getting really interesting..lol..both are fighting for the same person..so much tension! I have a question..is this gonna be a threesome..or is it one couple? Either way...it's gonna be great...keep up the good work, Im looking forward to your next chapter! 8D
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!
WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN NOW???? I can't believe that Seto witnessed the kiss between Jou and Mokuba. Oh my God! poor Seto. I really want to see his reaction now. But well it is partly his fault, if only he heared Jou and Mokuba when they were trying desperatly to invite him.
Wow this story is absolutely great!!
I can't believe that Jou revealed to Seto that he likes him. That was so sweet. And Seto was going to maybe kiss him...damn you Mokuba!
And Mokuba knows that Seto likes Jou. Was he even completely conscious when he kissed Jou?
Things are getting more and more complicated.
You left us with a great cliffie. Please update very very soon!!!!!!!!!!!
WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN NOW???? I can't believe that Seto witnessed the kiss between Jou and Mokuba. Oh my God! poor Seto. I really want to see his reaction now. But well it is partly his fault, if only he heared Jou and Mokuba when they were trying desperatly to invite him.
Wow this story is absolutely great!!
I can't believe that Jou revealed to Seto that he likes him. That was so sweet. And Seto was going to maybe kiss him...damn you Mokuba!
And Mokuba knows that Seto likes Jou. Was he even completely conscious when he kissed Jou?
Things are getting more and more complicated.
You left us with a great cliffie. Please update very very soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah the drama.... hehe now what?! i know ... Threesome!! :D
Great chapter! thanks for the update.
Great chapter! thanks for the update.
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. This seems very interesting. And this rivality between the two kaibas will be so fun to see.
But as a puppyshipper... I really hope that the story will end up with Jou and Seto being together. I felt a little bit sad for Seto. It will be so good if someone as bright as Jou will come and fill up his life. Mokuba with his cheerful personality can easily find someone else.
But as a puppyshipper... I really hope that the story will end up with Jou and Seto being together. I felt a little bit sad for Seto. It will be so good if someone as bright as Jou will come and fill up his life. Mokuba with his cheerful personality can easily find someone else.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O No one's reviewed, and I don't think that's fair (seeing as how many hits you've gotten). So here's mine. I really like this chapter, yes it's slow but it was chockfull of information and smiles ^_^ I can't wait for you second chapter, hopefully Seto will discover that it's Jou, Mokuba's meeting!
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..very interetsing start..now my ideas are filled with all kinds of ideas about what could happen next..lol. You are doing a great job, keep up the good work! I can't wait for your next chapter..so update when you can! 8D