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for Ritual Dance

by Shuman

schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! FInally a update. THis was a long awaited one for me. I loved the imagry you gave the dance... it was very easy to close your eyes and see the movements and feel the rhythems around them. Very good. Please add more soon.
person TerraRydya
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful I love this. I loved the descriptions and the wings. Just everything.
person tavia454
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so amazingly descriptive! Loving this story!!! Please continue?!
person HikariAi
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, GOOD.... This one is so good.... plz update soon.... ^_^
person Omnni
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person HannaFO
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seems to by quite good :D Please continue.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I hope you update soon. Happy Early Birthday.
person Cody T :P
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh I REALLY like this story! great start! I hope you have a very happy birthday!
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this one. I hope you get on with this one and your other stories. First to post. Makes me happy.
person YamiKuro
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love stories like this! I look forward to more.

Your Eager reader,

Kuro