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for Ritual Dance

by Shuman

person Jennifer
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello I read your story and I loved it and was wondering are you going to update soon? Can you please emial me if your going to update it.
person YamiKuro
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, Atemu is sweet :)

Kuro
person suki (tenshisuki)
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I don't think I've every read anything like this before and I believe for that reason I find this story very enjoyable. Really all your stories that I have had the pleasure of reading have at this point are all very interesting. The plot is wonderful and full of details that specifically add to the story and give it a great feel, and something I personally prefer in any fanfiction that I read you stick with the existing personalities of the characters instead of trying to mold the characters into something they obviously are not personality wise. You're stories remind me a bit of maggiemay's stories, although her's is Jou/Seto pairings. Yours though are very unique, and different from hers in that the ideas you have for your plots are on a whole new level than anything I've happened across to date. I hope that you continue with this and your other stories and update them very very soon. I'll be looking forward to it. ^.^
person YamiKuro
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOH!! I LOVED IT! BEAUTFUL! Short but sweet! I look forward to more!

Kuro
person viper
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job! I hope to see more!
person Sy
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting interesting. I hope you keep it up, the plot is one I haven't seen before. Your writing is very good.
person HikariAi
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay. A new chapter... AWESOME chapter, can't wait to read more.... Please update soon.... ^_^
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
......YAY!
J-chan
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I wonder what he will think when he finds he now has a mate.
person silverwolfe
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW...that's all I have to say...great job!! I like this story...please continue!