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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Kaiba is mean. Poor Jou. I wonder how far Kaiba will take this.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY. SHIT. I'm speechless. That had to be the most erotic thing I've ever read. Please continue this, I'm just dying to read more!
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!
That was hot^^
Hey, I would like to see also a hypnotized Seto^^
Anyway, I really wonder if Jou was really hypnotized or no XD
That was hot^^
Hey, I would like to see also a hypnotized Seto^^
Anyway, I really wonder if Jou was really hypnotized or no XD
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, Jou and Kaiba is my favorite pairing ever, so that immediately drew me to this.
Second, I absolutely loved it. Every detail down to the end. Hypnosis was a great idea, and I might have to do something similar if you don't mind me poking at it. Don't worry It wont be a jou and Kaiba fic either.... I don't plagiarize. lol
anyway I definitely think you could add onto this fic. For example you can give jou a activating code word... so that whenever someone uses that word, he goes back to a hypnotic state... that way if seto isn't around to fuck him, he could stir up some trouble instead. like in a pet shop. lol :X
I await anxiously to see if it continues <3
Second, I absolutely loved it. Every detail down to the end. Hypnosis was a great idea, and I might have to do something similar if you don't mind me poking at it. Don't worry It wont be a jou and Kaiba fic either.... I don't plagiarize. lol
anyway I definitely think you could add onto this fic. For example you can give jou a activating code word... so that whenever someone uses that word, he goes back to a hypnotic state... that way if seto isn't around to fuck him, he could stir up some trouble instead. like in a pet shop. lol :X
I await anxiously to see if it continues <3
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I meant to review this yesterday when I first read it, but didn't have the time! If you are willing then YES, please write more of this! It has such a ridiculous amount of potential - from all the delectable things that Seto can make him do - to the startling subconscious reactions he's going to be having at school! Seriously - I can't wait.
No.
Seriously.
I can't.
I will, in fact, be checking every day to see if this is updated lol!
No.
Seriously.
I can't.
I will, in fact, be checking every day to see if this is updated lol!
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing, very very hot xD. A couple of miss spelled words. I'm pretty sure you meant air instead of hair. But you must continue i want to see what happens next. And what Suggestions Seto gives Jou xD. Hope to see a update soon. Seto you dirty dirty boy.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was fucking HOT!!!!! I hope you keep going with this story. I really want to know what happens between Joey and Kaiba after this.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
continue! it was so hot. very nice.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue it. Great and Very, very hot! I feel bad for Jou, just a little.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definitely have me hooked so far. Please continue!