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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I DEMAND THAT YOU MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!! I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT BETWEEN SETO & JOEY!!!!!
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is really good. please update it soon.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this story? I really want to know what happens next with Joey and Kiaba. Besides, it's smoldering hot in my opinion, so please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really hot fic! PLEASE update soon!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG tht was great! I love the fact that hes hypnotized!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh brilliant, just brilliant! Everything I wanted it to be and more! Please continue as soon as you can, I can't believe how excited I was to see a new chapter! Loving the evil Seto!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!! I hope that you are planning on putting in more chapters just as hot as the first 2!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you added on because once again, it was sinfully addicting. I could picture the two of them literally getting off in my mind, and it was orgasmic. <3 <3
I also like the idea of eventually "training him to absolutely want him" I cannot wait for the next, but take your time, because I hope it will be as creative and hot as the last one :)
I also like the idea of eventually "training him to absolutely want him" I cannot wait for the next, but take your time, because I hope it will be as creative and hot as the last one :)
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was HOT
Seto is...naughty! I can't believe what he is doing! He has Jou completly under his control.
I'm really really excited for the moment Jou will discover what Seto is doing to him and ESPECIALLY what will be his revenge. Maybe he will hypnotize Seto this time.
And by the way, if Jou is the one who is controlled by Seto, the story shouldn't be called "Controlled puppy"? or...maybe this will change...wow I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Update!
Seto is...naughty! I can't believe what he is doing! He has Jou completly under his control.
I'm really really excited for the moment Jou will discover what Seto is doing to him and ESPECIALLY what will be his revenge. Maybe he will hypnotize Seto this time.
And by the way, if Jou is the one who is controlled by Seto, the story shouldn't be called "Controlled puppy"? or...maybe this will change...wow I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Update!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter
I hope you won't break jou's heart
I hope you won't break jou's heart