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for Controlling Puppy

by redhaze

person deecherrywolf
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! This was a very lovely read and I really hope you update soon! The next chapter will definitely be interesting. I am curious on what will happen when Jou finally finds out what Kaiba has been up to with him. But by that time, he might have come to really like it.

Please update as soon as you have the time! It's one of the best stories I've read on this site yet!
person M
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that I don't have any money to donate, but you are unbelievably talented! I look forward to the next chapter!
person draggy2
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho ho!

That was so enjoyable!

What a very... delicious read. One of the best Seto/Jou fics I've been able to find all year. Am I ever glad to see more chapters attached to this fic.\

PLEASE keep up the good writing; reading is most enjoyable. ^___^ What else could an author wish for!

~Draggy2
person Arien Calen
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!
I'll die if you don't!

-AC
person L.S.
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is quite possibly the hottest thing I've ever read!! hahah like, each chapter I just can't get over the HOTTNESS of it!! way to go ;) that's really awesome you've been able to write something so erotic!! Mindcontrol is one of my favorite and underwritten fetishes so THANK YOU!! haha update soon ^.~
person smalvina
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG
that was wonderful chapter! I don't want Jou to get hurt from Seto. please don't hurt him.
person margyy
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy to see that you updated! Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
person BLL
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!

Kaiba should totally make his own 1-900 number. (He's be so rich.... err... richer!!! Since you know, he's hypnotize his customers. HAHA!!!)

Hrm... though you'd think Jounouchi's meddling friends would turn up and ruin poor horny Seto's fun. (Heheheheeeh... *leers at naked Katsuya goodness.)

Anywho, excellent work. Keep up the smutty goodness, and I'll keep reading. ^_^
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated. I really like this story. Love the hypnosis stuff, very kinky.

Can't wait to see what Kaiba gets up to next with our poor puppy!

Please continue. Loving it! ^_^
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this story a week ago when it was way back on page 30 or something, and the first thing
I thought after finishing the second chapter was that it was quite sad that the author had abandoned the story.
But you havent!!

Imagine my exstatic and joyful squeal of surprise when I saw that it had been updated this morning XD
I couldn't review until now, and I blame work for that, but now this: your story is awesome.
and alluring....and all kinds of wicked parties and celebrations mixed together.