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for Controlling Puppy

by redhaze

person smalvina
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You alive !

that was great chapter , as always .
can't wait for the next chapters.
maybe you should finish this fic first and then the next one?
person MistressMuse
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! I'm happy you came out with chapter four! I was craving more. AMAZING JOB!!
person Andi
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!~ /sob
I love this fic. So much. Seto's deviousness and Jou's apparent obliviousness to it all. I have to admit that last little bit where Seto started freaking out over whether or not Jou was gonna try and top him made me laugh. xD He may not be submissive, but he is by no means a seme.
I'm just so happy you updated!! TT wTT I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and that new Naruto fic you mentioned in your author's note.
person invisble
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was very surprised to see an update, but very happy too. hope to see more shrotly
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!

You have no idea how much I've wanted this story to be updated!
No idea!!! (although this review should give you a clue XD)

You my friend have an extremly smutty imagination which I fully endorse and I look forward to seeing where you will take this.
(I really liked how you gave Jou more control in this update, I'd like more of this please >3>)

on a side note, there are a few spelling errors and weird sentence constructions in your chapters.
It's not disturbing the flow of reading per ce, I just picked up on them as I read through the previous updates.
person invisble
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed your stories. This on and what a Kiba wants especially. It's to bad you never finished them.
person Danni
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I sooo cant wait for the next part!! This is soooooo amazing!!!!!
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update again?!? I want to know what happens next!
person HPGirl28
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic and hope to read the next chapter soon.

But I do have one question.... when Joey is laying down, is he on his back like a turtle or is he laying face down?
person theallpowerfullme
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You need to updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate~

...

Please?